I can see the vision but the abruptly cutting on the scene is what's ruining it i think it would definitely do well in the form of proper long form story
Coming back to this again my 3rd read lol Ik they skipped a lot of the novel so there's missing context n character growths but does it have no side stories i feel like we needed some side stories
Did the he find out mc is his pair yet ???
You're letting it marinate? Btw no , but he's close , let it marinate more
Yess tyyy lol
I mean the ML loves the mc down that's for sure find urself a man like that
Aww I wish we saw the kids grown up but ig author probably didn't wanna draw mc old as it would've been more sad they wanted to end it here on a happier note
Ny greedy ass wanted all the dragons lol