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Idk gang it's a cool plot n all but it's fucking stupid, even if I put it into consideration of a supernatural plot.
You don't get any proper character development, they're all VERY rushed or just explained through a back story for no fucking reason (happened like 3 times too wtf)
Angst chapters were cool w me, that diary scene was pretty good, it explained why he hated his luck in detail, and why he befriended mc
Coming DOWN from it though, when they made up- no. It should've been more complex(?) IN a sense where they didn't just talk it out in 2 panels and forgive and forget everything.
Ending was not fucking good AT ALL. It's rushed, felt like the author ran out of ideas n needed to end the series so *boom car crash aaaaa I wake up and remembered everything now*
No romance was fine, I liked it that way more lowk, it's a very sweet dynamic duo, but the rest of the mc's friends aren't really relevant.
William's incident thing: it was fucking stupid n there was NO need for Williams background sorry because he wasn't gonna change anyway. Sure, ig you wanna know why he acted that way but I think it was pretty clear that it was his fucking inferiority complex w the others.
Overal - would NOT recommend this, cute art! But the overall plot and build up was not worth it