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Ok so like i get why the FL is literally insane, i mean regressing multiple times and dying in multiple way would make anyone crazy. And i also get why she wants to kill everyone who wronged her because of both revenge and wanting to change her story. That i GET. Where the PROBLEM lies is the fact FL is just a sociopath. Like the amount of plot holes here is crazy, i can barely follow along with whatever this plot is. Raymond has me all types of confused. Dont get me started on this true love bullshit. Bro instead of trying to put all this plot and stuff the story really just could have been about FL being psychotic and living her life as a murder till she finally dies after killing everyone or something you know? But no its all about trying to find out who she is, who her mom is, if she is gonna be in love with Raymond etc. idk maybe im being dramatic but this gave me such a headache trying to understand i kinds lost all interest when she didnt kill the black haired guy and got her dad to kill himself. Again shes crazy I KNOW but jesus it all just went downhill after the fire.
Good luck to yall that are gonna continue this. Yall stringer then me