
this book coulda been better if the girl was actually useful :) y do authors have to make EVERY girl a love interest and on top of that she is so dumb. she could of contributed to his plan, and not be a total nuisance. i feel like she will help him just bc she has feelings, she could've had like a past to make her want to help, not just bc after like 2 days she likes him. at least just for helping her at least :/

she could've been an important aspect of the story. instead the author made her so lame. like wtf were ch 8-9 ?? i had high hopes for her, but does she actually have worms for brains. like her character makes the book a total turn off, especially since she's obviously gonna b a constant occurrence . i don't think i can continue with this book if she's gonna b this horribly written.
she literally got sexually assaulted and almost r4ped @ the beginning. now she's working as a prostitute . like hello ???? it's so confusing how she's just brushing over this ? not to mention she also got kidnapped a few days ago. surely she would have like PTSD , now she's not even fighting the whole being dragged into prostitution. what's wrong with her, seriously. she should PROBABLY be very concerned with her situation. NOT to mention the fact her whole little daydream about her 'client' ripping her clothes off, as if that wasn't a traumatic thing that HAPPENED to her ?? the author also added that little joke panel about the mc, as that's really something to joke about at this time ? another thing, she apparently has feelings for him now, and she wants to help him. that's the reason. if she was written good MAYBE a reason she wants to help is for the countless amount of times the man as rescued her. this character really needs a rewrite ASAP!!!!
hmm.. she seems really sus to me because when you look at other characters even the bad ones have depth but she is really fucking shallow soo ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ I wouldn't be surprised if she actually worked with them or something