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Okay, I’m not realky the type to write reviews but I had to let my frustration out for this one. So where to begin with?
Well first I hate the ML. He is a dick through and through. There is no reedemable quality in him. He is a monster more than anyone else in this story (maybe aside from the stepmother but they are in the same position for me. And she is the villain which show how much of a scum he is), he has no compassion nor remorse nor empathy. I hate him.
Plus he is a rapist. I hate that but at this point there is always rape in most of yaoi. I’m numb to it at this point, which isn’t a good thing but anyway. So my point is why do I want to root for him? He is suppose to be reedeming himself but to this point I saw nothing that could make me change my mind.
And mind you, we are already 50 chapters in.
It’s my second point. Which is, the slow pace of this story!! WHERE’S THE PLOT???
But why is that? It’s simple, yet infuriating.
They have sex all the time!!!!!! Of course the plot won’t move forward. I stayed because it was interesting enough and it was spooky because of the gorgeous art. BUT, please!!! The sex!! I beg you to stop it! Or at least don’t take 2 damn chapters for it every time. And it happened every 2 to 3 chapters!!! I could have skipped most of the sex’s chapters and I wouldn’t miss that much of the plot seriously. (And as much as it pains me to say it but I had enough of seeing them fucking). And there is no feeling involved during the act anyway so it’s boring fast.
I didn’t count (nor do I have the will to) but I think without those scenes, there would be only 15 to 20 chapters at most.
Anyway I finished my rant.