I have to be honest... I didn't really like the first half of the chapters (was even wondering why I was reading it...except for the comedy parts between the two ML) but I have to say it's getting better now... Hope the chapters to come make it even better for all of us.
Now that's what I call a good cliffhanger. Nice job, author. Quite the finale for season 1.
Demis will definitely do anything to keep him alive.