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"My cum will make a huge mess, and it will be a hassle to clean it up. This way, we can fuck each other and cum all over the place, and not have to worry about making a mess"
Sounds lazy and preachy. What is this, a condom ad? Condoms suck. The man wearing a condom is fucking a rubber, and not another man. He can’t come inside, or all over the place. The rubber is a wall that gets in the way of building genuine and meaningful physical connection
"STDs, blah blah blah"
These are fictional characters. There's zero risk of transmitting STDs in fiction. Zero!
Realism? The "ghost" story is unrealistic, why would the sexual interactions be realistic? IRL, the men could have gotten tested and saved themselves the trouble of starring in a cringeworthy condom ad
The cum leaked out of the openings of the condoms, and the characters made a huge mess, what was the point? To preach? Sex is supposed to be messy. The mess is the fun part. Either make a mess, or forget about sex
Oh, and the "straight" parts? They triggered the downfall of the story