beta
this story is your typical gay love story. filled to the brim with various wattpad-esque tropes but fails to utilise them in an interesting way, therefore coming off as boring. it’s hard to immerse yourself in a story that hits all the cliche plot points. Homophobic family? mc who is super hot and all the ladies love him despite him being a twink? straight ml whos super angsty? inane love triangle caused by mcs old fling? 2nd ml who only realises he’s in love with mc after their relationship ends?
the characters unfortunately end up coming off as very simple and two dimensional due to the generic use of tropes and conventions. what is the point in reading what is essentially a nicely drawn wattpad fanfic? sorry but not even the beautiful art can make me tolerate the subpar writing.