mmm this latest conflict really makes no sense which makes me sad considering how much i love this story.. but i can just excuse it for teenage bullshittery. Who hasn’t done obnoxiously entitled stuff to other people when they were a teenager?
Another story that capitalises off of the abuse and oppression of women but does nothing to confront this in an engaging way.
You can always read the original novel that goes deeper with these topics
i read this cos i saw a cute older uke but i was disappointed to see him get treated like shit. It’s so hard to find some nice wholesome stuff with older ukes
thank you to whoever fixed chapter 52, much appreciated
Mc is interesting and unique but the surrounding characters are so cliche it’s boring. Not to mention that the male lead is obsessive garbage. His love feels fake, he fell in love just cos she was interesting? He just sat back and watched as the original rosalie was abused. He has no shame whatsoever and not in a cute way, dropped
literally why i stopped reading 25 chaps in, not feeling the chemistry at all with the ML
EXACTLY!!
MF knew the girl was being abused, but he did not even speak up just left her and went on his merry way NOW he is in love because she can fight? B ****pls...
These Authors will really dig deep into the trenches of what a woman can least tolerate in a man and try to paint and repaint such characters as appealing...
this story is your typical gay love story. filled to the brim with various wattpad-esque tropes but fails to utilise them in an interesting way, therefore coming off as boring. it’s hard to immerse yourself in a story that hits all the cliche plot points. Homophobic family? mc who is super hot and all the ladies love him despite him being a twink? straight ml whos super angsty? inane love triangle caused by mcs old fling? 2nd ml who only realises he’s in love with mc after their relationship ends?
the characters unfortunately end up coming off as very simple and two dimensional due to the generic use of tropes and conventions. what is the point in reading what is essentially a nicely drawn wattpad fanfic? sorry but not even the beautiful art can make me tolerate the subpar writing.
where is the lie??? let me give you a virtual standing ovation for this speech. took the words right out of my mouth. plots and tropes like this are getting boring
i think it's fine to have tropes in a story if the author knows how to write the characters well...and honestly this story is at least better than a lot of bls right now. i like how complex the characters are, and i like how their thoughts and actions don't lack depth. yes the story isn't unique or original, but it's not just a bunch of cliches wrapped up together to make a story. i feel like the author actually cared about the characters rather than just tying up a bunch of tropes together. though i can see why you don't like how it's not really a fresh new story, i think it's unfair to say that this story is just a bunch of cliches when clearly the author took time at writing what goes on in each chapter
stupid fl who doesn’t have any type of analysis or foresight skills which is absolutely crazy cos her special power literally GIVES her so much information to utilise. You’d think she would’ve learned something after dying a million times. Dropped
YO THEY GETTING FREAKY! VRO SAID PUT IT DEEP AND SUCK ON IT?
it’s pretty clear that his subordinates are way stronger than him, so why do they listen to him? they’re supposed to be crazy and out of control, right? why do they take commands from someone who is so much weaker than them..
He's respectful to them and let them be who they are, I guess.
sorry but that isnt a very plausible reason, thanks for trying tho
I think it’s more out of a matter of respect instead of just listening to him they also rely on him to take care of duties as their leader and in return he’ll most likely get treated like a real leader since they know that they need someone to lead them if they want to stay working platoon(and none of them really want that duty most likely) but also since almost no one wants to take care of the “crazy” ones and our mc hasn’t really seemed to object to the idea knowing that someone weaker stepped up to take care of them probably put that respect needed for them to “listen” to him so to say(that probably seems like mushed of rambling sorryg
agreed with all of the above! that sort of mutual respect is super important especially since it's something very difficult to come by. not to mention our mc is quite special himself... it requires some real "craziness" to dedicate yourself and your entire life so wholly to his dream. crazies recognize crazies!
Haha yea I thought abt adding that last part but decided I was ranting for quite a bit lol and thought it best to leave it be
O net they fought who will be leader between them but doughty like crazy,and just made the weak guy the leader but mc is so admirable they want him to grow
*** i bet they fought who will be leader between them but fought like crazy and just made the weak guy the leader but mc is so admirable they want him to grow