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Spoilers but honesty save yourself the trouble of reading
The explanation for how machine god came to be and how it affects vision god is so incredibly stupid and corny LMAO be so for real. It just reads like a really bad joke.
This story is also noticeably really badly paced. The explanation dump at the end was also pull of cliches.
The whole story there was 0 reason for MC to hide his ability from ML besides cause trouble. Like they couldn’t talk it out or sum
Also there was no chemistry