MrJustice

Kill them. Kill it all, burn it. Why does this exist?

And here's how. Join me by reading my frustration (⌒▽⌒).

1) I wanted for our dear FL to have more ties to her other life, like family, memories, career, etc.
I really wasn't happy to how easily the author cut it off. You can't simply show her moden body then scrap after using it only explain her character change. This would've been really nice to see her struggle off with later in the story when the ML lost his love.

2) Feeling more depressed when the ML's emotions got scrapped.
To be fair, FL still can't easily accept that the body she possess now was her's from the beginning. I feel like that should've been explored more. Probably shove some angst in there somewhere where she really is questioning if any or all efforts given to both of them were worth it. If this life was worth it.

3) Give the pain suckers some attention. Throw a few mental dilemmas in there somewhere.
Is it justifiable for them to live, should they be allowed to live? The implications of their success. They were supposed to be emphatic. Shouldn't they fell guilty for being alive?

End of rant. I should get paid for my unsolicited advice at this point.#－.－)