Well this could be an amazing story but there are weaknesses and strength.
Strength : -the way the characters gone through misunderstanding and feelings is great. I mean, if this is another authors, the misunderstanding would make me feel so tired of reading ‘cuz it happens over and over , for a long period
- the art is super duper cool
- the character chemistry is wonderful
- i love the side couples
Weaknesses:
- i think that putting too much side storyline was a bad move. I didnt even wanna read them cuz i was waiting for the main plot
- if kim ho has such an character, not even fully believe his friend, why would he have feelings for sbd that fuckin easy ? Id like it fast, but it should be more logic.
- the friend. I mean. Wtf ? I like him so much, but i dont like the situation that cause the awkwardness with his friend. Weird plot line.
- Plot holes .
Well but this keep me reading so it nice though.
“Im going to study your body... “ i mean , its rape, right ?
Yea its rape
Well at least ít’s someone’s fetish
Not mine tho. It's gonna be a no for me
Yeah me too
Im on team Mielle :)) i like her from the start.
I respect your opinion but I definitely don’t agree with it. I think the Mc and her both are horrible and distrustful people. Though the only reason I like the Mc is because I pity her. (Also I read the novel so that’s how I know what’s going to happen and why my opinion on the two characters won’t change.)
Welp theyre both evil but i like mielle vibe.
Bad character built though
I cant see what you comment :(((
Sorry I tried to do the shrugging emoji but it didn't show
:)) i need to get to sleep. Its already 3.AM and i have homework tomorrow, so yeah, gud bai ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I know right! I still see the MC as the V and mielle too.. The MC kept reminding herself that she was using the maid and how dumb and naive she was. It just gets on my nerves how can you just use someone to extent that had nothing to do with the planning. I dislike both of them this was the worse Manga I've ever read all the characters are retarded and useless at one point I liked it but then it just flopped for me.. I don't know if the teacher was involved or not but I still dislike the MC smh whatever
I meant the teacher
As someone who finished the novel I think that you will hate her more and more as time goes on. At first I didn’t hate Mielle that much either just like you. But later in the story it’s pretty much obvious that Mielle is a complete dumbass and always needs someone to protect her and she doesn’t hesitate to throw away people. She’s basically a total bitch by the end of the novel and gets played by the MC in a very satisfying way. I don’t like her but I do love her character development as a dumbass. So she’s a pretty good character for the story but not a good person.
I don't think she ends up in a good way... I think the FL went a bit too far in my opinion (I mean, why killing K... when he did his best to repay what he has done...) That was the most horrible part for me. But I still liked FL because, yes, she is savage. We like empowering development.
Yeah true I did feel a little bit bad when she you know fucked up the entire family.. but then thinking about it they were horrible people. Like the whole family has the blood of abandoning people and are also super egotistical bitchy nobles. Plus most of those nobles get executed in the end anyways. But idk I liked how FL handled shit, she’s damn strong women better than Mielle who can’t do shit without a guardian and I love her for that :)
:)) i guess the character will be developed that way, but i kinda dissapointed with this story. The characters are a mess and still have boring motip.
Its literally:” wOw i have sex with him(several time), i fake dating him , we even bought sextoy for some tf reason. Guess he didnt like me. Its all a lie.”
Idk why, but I read your comment in my head in pewd's voice, and it made all the more funnier so I had to share, also I agree lol
LMAO this is genius
Dude that's so true. Like when u read someone's comment or something, you either read it with a accent, someone's else's voice, or like idk, but it's so wierd lol. And I read ur comment in my head in Barack Obama's voice broooo idk y but it was only until the end of reading your comment that I realized I was doing that. Bruh now imt wondering what other comments or posts I've read with a different inside voice or head voice.
Lol that makes me think of the warning thing that’s attach to some the manga and I read it as the intro to law & order shows. Duh duh.
:)) we all do that , dont we ?
Wait ? Cousin ? Is this legal ?
cousins can get married in japan
That ruined the scientists’ whole career
middle east too, or any Arabic country
It's very legal, just frowned upon by many types of people.
Woah, another discovery I've learned :0
Lol i made this comment since im still in middle school.
Why people is always saying kill Donga ? Kill yourself duh. If he dies , their white tiger will die too. Killin somebody even though they knew dongha was his lover is just as bas as those parent.
What about Angel ??????????????? I thought james love him so much ?( as a father )
Yeah James found out about Angels death, the person whom he cherished the most, and just brushed it off and immediately had sex with Samuel lol. A very well thought out ending
Logic
Why i always find a story like this in 2:AM to read and feel embarrased when i wake up ?
https://aoisorasongngu.blogspot.com/2019/05/update-akuma-to-keiyaku-vol2-chap-13.html?m=1 Its not in english though
Thankssss now my heart can rest in peace ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ