Loved the second one. So kinky.
The first one ...the last couple pages grossed me out...so he was the brother / daddy of his son...and I was thinking WTF did I just read.
But it's Smexy so Weee ^w^
Right.. I felt ashamed of myself for thinking that...but still hot ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
hahahahahaha so true :)
The cover pic doesnt match with the story at all.
Thats it.... Imposible its not a proper ending at all......noooooooo
it could actually go as a plot for a story not just a short oneshot(extra). really liked it.
I agree I wish it could be longer. I enjoyed it
so what was the first pages about. Hope nothing bad i like the story so far.
interesting...loved the punch...stubborn old man
So did I! Boy did he deserve it.
It was so so so so so so so and a milion so cute. Loved it
the prologue was ok but the first ch kind of...hmmmm lets see
looks interesting lets see how it goes...
ok lets see, not a bad start.....a little bit short but bearable.
Loved the second one. So kinky.
The first one ...the last couple pages grossed me out...so he was the brother / daddy of his son...and I was thinking WTF did I just read.
But it's Smexy so Weee ^w^
Right.. I felt ashamed of myself for thinking that...but still hot ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
hahahahahaha so true :)