guys I'm sorry but I still can't get over their necks like anytime she tilts her head to look at someone I burst out laughing cause when she does it her head is 10ins away from her body I wouldn't mind if it was just a few people but it's EVERYONES NECKS XD to some extent that is and it's just so funny cause it's supposed to be serious and then she does her head tilt thing again
I feel like she needs to let lose more tbh like of course He loves her as is but like her brother said she was always raised to be the empress to be perfect like she's nothing more than a perfect candidate for the throne :( I want to see her have fun and show that genuine smile more often ALSO I think it would be so cute when after they are married and are to busy to be able to see each other they still used the messenger bird and had these cute kinda cringe love letters sent back and forth to each other just to make them smile or laugh so wholesome my brain is torturing me with this cuteness
You guys are seriously rude asf for saying "finally it's over" can you stop? Of course it's going to be long as the story progresses her missions are going to get harder and more complex and it shouldn't feel long at all if you actually liked the story because it went by fast asf for me but anyways seeing him cry made my heart ache but how did he know she was leaving??
Tbf i love love lovedddd this arc, but it rlly was just genuinely long. Its vastly different in pacing compared to other sections, so ofc ppl are gonna say that. Plus diff ppl have diff opinions, many parts of many stories are debated as being boring/uninteresting or not, you shouldnt let that opinion get to you so much.
You're discounting the opinion of MANY of the commenters who have enjoyed this series of stories from the first arc. A lot of us thought this one felt unduly long.
Doesn't mean everyone has the same opinion, but that is not rude. It just IS. Unless you think everyone's opinion should be the same as yours.
Clearly missed my point I never said their opinion has to be the same as mine? I'm not denying that the arc was longer than the rest but people saying "finally! It's over" like they just survived the war IS rude asf Ntm those same people were the ones in the comments section complaining about how long it is just because it pasted ten chapters durning this arc also isn't this to be expected? She's transferring into different stories that are going to be longer or shorter than others she had previously went into so I don't understand the complaining also it would just be boring if she was in and out of a story and onto the next one in just a few chapters and neither her or the characters in the stories would have any growth
I loved this arc too and as I've already said I'm not denying it's longer than the rest but that was just a given from when I started reading this that for this type of story there would be longer arcs and shorter arcs seeing as how she's going to be jumping into shorter or longer stories that are falling apart and I'm not letting it get to me?? I'm just saying my opinion about their opinions :) it just so happens that A LOT of people feel differently from how I do
You definitely missed the point of what they was saying. They never said everyone opinion should be the same as theirs but thatâs it rude to just say âitâs finally overâ like what did yâall expect? Each arc is going to get more difficult and longer because of the difficulty. In this arc she couldnât use any of the tools to help her. she was for once actually a regular human. Not only that but itâs rude to the author who is writing these for our enjoyment. Yâall can be done or tired with this arc no one said you couldnât but at least be respectful.
Also, I have known hundreds of writers--I have written fiction, reviewed it, and edited it--and some of my pals to this day that I contact daily are writers, a few bestsellers. They are all (at least the pros) used to criticism, Used to varying reviews. Love the great reviews. Move on from low reviews. But all pro writers (and artists) know that people will react. Some negatively.
Overall, I really enjoy this series, from the sassy title to the kickass lead.
But I can feel frustrated by a prolonged (repetitive) arc. And pros don't throw a fit over this. It's part of the job to take criticism. It's life for creatives. Period.
You think disrespectful. We think individual audience response.
(Dang, my eyes are tired from reading novels and I can't even proof this.)
You do know that not everyone is the same correct? And I doubt you know every writer from around the world. Even most âproâ writers canât handle criticism. Some can some canât. It life and it happens. Just because it life for creators doesnât mean that EVERY creator/writer can handle criticism. Just like if you was a youtuber people know criticism comes with the job but that doesnât mean they can all handle it.
Fyi just because they know that criticism and negative comments comes with the job doesnât mean it doesnât hurt. Criticism can be disrespectful.
Also the âpaceâ is not the author fault but the uploader/translater. This arc been completed and in the raw they have at least 2-3 more arcs completed.
Uploaders have life outside of an illegal website. If they want the story to hurry up then they should learn Chinese and read the raws or upload it themselves so that means translating, typesetting, and proofreading making sure everything is grammatically correct for english readers. So yes it is rude since uploaders took their time to translate these stories for us to enjoy.
Wth? Sorry but I can't believe that one bit why are you trying to defend negative criticism and what people were saying in the comments was not criticism it was just being rude there's a difference between ACTUAL criticism and just being an asshole negative criticism is at least helpful but just saying "I'm so glad this Arc is finally over" is not helpful at all just being rude as I've already said but I don't understand how you could be an editor but let my point fly over your head that badly I feel bad for people who let you edit their work
This is part of the issues, yes. But in this arc, THREE men was NOT necessary to set up the endgame. That's part why it felt long. Two guys showe dup and then...boof....seem to have been irrelevant. If they had been woven into the endgame/climax to add complexity, okay. But they were just, "Hi, I love/hate you" and "Hi, I am a cheating scum" and bye, I am never heard from again.
LMFAO FRR! I lowkey thought it was a lie but im trying to give them the benefit of the doubt cause like wtf theyâre literally trying to justify negative criticism it canât even be called criticism since some of the comments are just people being assholes. Constructed Criticism should be helpful that helps a writer improve their stories. Not complain about the pace like ungrateful children when theyâre lucky an uploader is even uploading/translating this story for us to enjoy.
A real editor/writer should understand the differences between constructive criticism and people being assholes. A real editor/writer should understand the time and patience it takes to proofread, translate and fix any mistakes. At the end of the day we are readers reading on an illegal website that could disappear anytime so the least us readers could do it be respectful and patient.
Don't feel bad. They have been very grateful. One won an award :)
The issue is this: saying an arc that FELT long is finally over is NOT excessive or rude criticism. It's an expression of relief. We can move on.
Or perhaps I've seen so many actually mean and nasty and vicious reviews that this seems so minor by comparison. Some of my writer friends have even gotten threats.
I think you're overreacting to disappointment with this arc, honestly.
Once again just because it comes with the job doesnât mean people have to be dicks. THEY can choose to be respectful especially on an illegal website where UPLOADERS are providing THEM stories to read. YOU clearly canât read. Youâre an editor yet youâre not understanding anything Iâm or the op commeter saying.
What they said arenât even criticism those are opinions. There a difference between opinions and constructive criticism. Criticism is helpful. Opinions is a view or judgment. Those comments are OPINIONS and theyâre being impatient ungrateful children.
Says the person whose lying about being an editor to make your point seem better "I think you're overreacting" oh please lmao idc what your job is .-. I'm saying it's rude and disrespectful because it is these people don't have to upload this to this site but they do and people saying "finally it's over" is discrediting their work idc if I'm not the arthur I'm a fan of the story and appreciate all the hard work that goes into making it something that an EDITOR such as yourself should know and understand and as a matter a fact.. what are you doing on this site? ._. I feel like a "high class editor" such as yourself wouldn't be here reading this stuff for free also idc if 1 person won a reward that you edited?? That has nothing to do with what I said in my original comment stop trying to make yourself look better .-.
Awe that's adorable but why do you sound like the girl who tells the kyle kid "I know you! THIS isn't who you are so stop fighting and just take a deep breath" I'm sorry it's just the first thing I thought of reading your comment honey I was fine until they started bringing up their "career" like I asked about it or something just to make their opinion more valid that's so stupid to me if I wanted to know about their life story and accomplishments I would have asked idk why they think I'm supposed to care about how someone they edited won an award? How is your whole life going to be based around critiquing and editing other people's stories but you can't tell the difference between negative criticism and someone just being an asshole? SHEESHHHH
You're telling me someone was able to pull him away from the door? Cause I know he wouldn't leave on his own @-@ also Rosie is ugly asf everytime she pops up on my screen I have the urge to just throw up I thought maybe in the past she wasn't going to be as bad and like she went crazy after meeting him but she's clearly always been psychotic I'm so sorry for ever giving you a chance Rosie I can't stand you please disappear from the story
KLEIN PLEASE BE THE ML (unless she does keep them all as concubines and nothing more but I want him to be her favorite just strictly out of spite for his brother and the fact that he doesn't even know he's being used like that is kind of funny to me and also makes me feel bad) YOU ARE NOT GOING TO TELL ME THAT THE BEST SIMPLY THE BEST REVENGE WOULD BE TO NOT ONLY MARRY HIS BROTHER BUT TO HAVE CHILDREN WITH HIS BROTHER THAT IS SIMPLY THE BEST REVENGE NOT TO MENTION HIS BROTHER IS SO DAMN FINE I CAN'T HE IS STUNNING
but I also really like her knight (he's actually probably my favorite) but he's like her childhood friend and you know they never win so
The one black hair guy freaks me out I don't like him so far
Even better she just keeps them all except the black haired guy cause I feel like he's really fishy and yeah I'm excited for the future of this story BTW all of her kids would be adorable
I'm genuinely so glad she didn't think he was lying I'm glad she doesn't let her anger towards him blind her judgement I actually like him he's not as much of a dick as I initially thought he would be (I thought he would be as trashy as the trash from remarried empress and I'm really glad that's not the case) I don't think he's in the right at all and if he really you know genuinely loved her he would never try and marry another woman or ever ask her to wait for him for five more years after she had already waited for him for like what three or so years? Pathic but I also feel like he doesn't have a choice? but he's the emperor? So I don't know how to feel about him I don't hate him but I don't really like him either
Why didn't she just tell her brother she wanted to train with Eclise? Instead of just letting him have that shitty attitude I wanna kick him in the balls and cut off his all his hair strip him naked in the woods far away and see if he can make it back home maybe it'll humble him out and teach him to keep his mouth shut actually while I'm at it let me send that pink onr out in the woods far away as well but not together
GIRL IM