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i was having fun reading this, until these chapters. the sight of a 27 year old man lusting after a 17 year old girl just because she proposed a political marriage to him is nauseating. and this brown hair girl is pissing me the fuck off too. what is it with authors trying to pair nearly 30 year old men with underage girls? is it that hot to see children get it on with old fucks?
please don't tell me these two end up in any kind of relationship. romance ALWAYS ruins a story, especially if it's between a little girl and a 27 year old man. not to mention, taekyung's older brother's weird OOC behavior with wolhwa already ruined his character for me. this apparently no nonsense character is nearly pissing himself being in proximity of a pretty woman? shut the fuck up.
there should be a law against authors who have never interacted with women trying to write them, because these "women" always come off as so incredibly fucking idiotic and braindead. how are you gonna be this dumb and naive and survive in a murim world for this long? so goddamn annoying.