The plot and flow is actually pretty good but got rushed at the ending. Not enough emotional feels between MC and ML but I guess that goes with how the story went, although I wish they could have built on it last 1/3. Guessing the rating is what is is because kids reading on Mangago not getting all the business transactions lol.
I really like this story and I love JJ and Leo's relationship. And what I liked is how both their faults and the non comm in the relationship is shown in full display.
But lets all agree - what JJ did to him in the garage is assault. Leo may have agreed to it, but its still rough SA and when he pushed Leo's face to the cement floor, that was really hard to see. You dont do that to people you love. Ever. Glad JJ felt remorse.