this would have turned out good if they didn't rush it. the art style is exquisite, the plot is somewhat good but it was so short and it felt rushed. half of the time they didn't make any sense and i just couldn't help but get mad about how stupid they sound. overall, if i had to rate it from 1-10 i'd give it a solid 3. ://
i really don't know how to feel about this one? like it had its cute moment and shiz but like the seme is a fucking psycho stalker and like breaking in someone's house putting a used condom in their trash bin? no from me. and like he's lowkey a rapist too and um i really don't know how to feel about it
Then maybe this kind of story is just not your cup of tea cuz if we see it from psychological/romance/comedy points of view objectively, this story is pretty well made and well delivered :)
This manga is sub par at most. If you take an objective stance, story wise it's poorly executed; there's not much development in the story and the characters are ironically 2 dimensional that they don't feel any diffferent from you typical yaoi stock characters.
What do you mean by not much development? Have you forgotten that the uke was a straight up jerk who liked to play around using his money and status and later became a submissive lover for someone whom he falls genuinely? Also let's not forget the seme who was basically lacking human emotions since he was little yet he started to develop genuine feelings for the uke amd actually started behaving like normal person with human emotions should. If you said that the developments were not very detailed, then maybe I would've agreed with you. I mean, what did you expect from merely a completed 6 chapters story? It would've been way better if it was longer, but for a completed 6 chapter story, I think this was well made and well delivered.
Oh and I don't really get what you meant by the characters are ironically 2 dimensials. I mean, it IS a manga. It IS a 2 dimensional art after all. If you wanna see ones with 3 dimentional construct, why not watch some 3D anime or movies instead?
look i didn't say it's not i enjoyed it, but like looking at it from another perspective - it's pretty fucked up. i never said that it isn't good, did i?
i actually, personally, agree with LegendarySavage. the development WAS poorly delivered. i agree with your points, that, yes, the seme was a jerk, playing around and using his money and status for fun, but we see that for like a brief second, nothing really exciting, pretty stereotypical in yaoi manga these days even. and also he didn't really 'genuinely fall' like you said it. all he wanted to do, at first, was make him cum so he isn't the only one. after that, yes, he does really fall for him with that i agree. nad also the whole ordeal with lacking human emotions, i didn't buy it. i just couldn't as much as i tried. like, okay, fine, maybe you can't express emotions very well, i know people like that. but he didn't know why other people were crying or being happy? like, excuse me, he was in middle school. there is no way he doesn't know about basic emotions and how other people express them and why. there are books, there is television, he lived long enough to see countless of people crying or laughing, you can't just realize this in such age. also, in the end when the uke realizes himself who broke into his house the previous day and all this, we see no explanation, no details about that - why did he do it?, for what? - we get nothing. the manga was not executed well in my opinion and there are other mangas slash manhwas that are also rape-ish and stalker-ish that i've enjoyed in the past and still enjoy, as fucked up as that sounds. for you to say that it isn't my cup of tea was just a stupid presumption, because i didn't like that one badly executed manga.
Your standards must be quite low for you to consider this as “development”. Progression is not synonymous to development in any form nor shape. To say that this was “well made” and “well delivered” is too much of a stretch considering this was not thoroughly planned out nor were the characters fleshed out properly.
By 2 dimensional I was referring to how the characters didn’t have much
depth to them and they act as though being a douche is a personal
ity trait. Other than that they’re shallow and easy to read. Judging by your thought process and mindset, I’d assume you pay no particular attention to the plot and critique it as thoughyou had it figured out: you don’t. This is not that great of a material nor does it hold a candle to the most iconic yaoi mangas out there.
TLDR; it’s not that deep sis. Stop looking much into it when there’s literally nothing to it.
u said it sis
to everyone saying he's not being toxic... see yall in therapy