
if you don't like this story that is NOT about your monogamous standard, just take your hate and leave. there is love, there is desire, they can be differentiated or not. you think you are so open just because you read BL? Well, queen, try to understand another human beings feelings that you don't meet your standards! !!

It's a Master/puppy relationship. What dos You expect? It's not supossed to be sweet and smooth. It's about dominance... You should ho Google it ir something.

Well a lot of ppl are complaining about the shitty writing as far as BDSM is concerned. Sorry if I came off as condescending btw, I get passionate about this topic but from what I've seen it's a lot of ppl annoyed by that more than the kinky content. Yes there is versatility in BDSM but this isn't even real BDSM.
I will say I have seen some ppl who seem to be mad simply cause it's not some weak ass shit though lol so I get where you're coming from there.
im more worried about how could you not like pasta.