rvv's Topics (73)

i HATE myself for thinking this but given ptj’s obsession w plot twists james is prob going to stand up and be like no lol you thought

Props to the author for ending the story, as much as it breaks my heart. I love stories that are long, but sometimes it feels like we’re on a perpetual roller coaster (cough, lookism, cough), and even if i enjoy it A LOT it’s still nice to have an ending. That being said donald was done dirty. Also ben is literally so madara coded bruh no one can deny that fact

why did the plot have to go so hard. now i need this to be a longer

Even if smo gets shot it should be fine…right? I mean bwat always treats us well with happy endings(๑•ㅂ•)و✧

The story is so good i wont even be mad if it turns out he has like 15 more tattoos on his legs or smth

Challenge for ptj: stop making the characters that r always on the brink of death so hot

Did the editor not tell the author that the qnas were in bad taste….

lowkey though i adore their relationship,, so sweet but also the top isnt an asshat

Unrelated but smith and jonas are so hot

So sorry to do this but here i go….bear with me

Before i start going ballistic i just want to say that i love the plot, or at least what it’s trying to be. Very interesting setup, unique characters that play a role in the struggle for power, etc,, i do enjoy reading this i really do its just some scenes i just….

Ok now i get to talk shit

1. HORRIBLE STORYTELLING WHAT okay so this one doesn’t rlly matter in the whole scheme of things but can the author stop telling and just show us. Like u dont need to say ur whole ass backstory and plan etc etc just….show us. Let us figure out on our own. I dont rlly mind the spoon-feeding too much tbh, it’s just that sometimes its extra corny and as someone who suffers from serious second hand embarrassment it was really hard for me to read this.

2. “Im a top but oh wait is that a toppier top than me? Oh, he assaulted me and now i like being a bottom”. Dont get me wrong, theres nothing bad w being a switch. What reallly pisses me off is the fact that i really liked the mc. But the mishandling of his character is reallly, really a huge detriment to the story. Like im taken out of the fantasy. Im rooting for him bcuz hes strong and self-sufficient. Not because i want to see him get violated by some generic ahh dude

3. The existence of the top is a crime. The story would have been SO MUCH BETTER if the top had a single shred of humanity. Bro looks like the top from payback but is MILES behind. How do u fuck up ur own story so bad? I love this storyline, i genuinely do. But the amount of times i felt extremely uncomfortable reading this was criminal. I feel like the mc is, for me at least, a pretty fleshed out character in the sense that i really, really felt bad for him when he was being raped. I didnt want to see anything bad happen to him, not even getting called out by others etc. and that's not to say i dont feel for other characters, just that i felt especially connnected to this mc. thats why it hurt so bad whenever smtj happened to him. like i was so uncomfortable….

4. give my man a break. you know what this reminds me of? foul. at least the mc in that one was a little bit respected, if it even counts. this is like no reason except the author is trying to give ir a reason. there is a line and the author crossed it. it feels like every single character is out to get mc. like that green eyed dude… bro mind ur own business how about u worry abt ur dead brother instead of sticking ur nose into this already fucked up man's business…..

in conclusion: the author fumbled so hard but i'll prob continue reading cos tje storyline is actually not too bad (=・ω・=)