rereading it and gosh, the way the only time I've thought of mielle as beautiful was when she got beheaded. her peacful face and bob were truly beautiful (but never as beautiful as my dear aria)
fl: *dies after getting her engagement broken*
also fl: guess I'll have to break my engagement befire that because i see no other way to survive (ignores the 100 other reasons she died)
the way gu fei treat yan yan like a child and yan yan acts like a child from his big 19 years of age, is kinda uncomfortable. like giving him fairytales to read bust still wanting to fuck him? if i was yan yan and i knew that he knew that I'm studying highschool or college level books I'd get offended to be given fairytale books to read while I'm bored sitting around his office bc he wants to keep an eye on me.
gu fei is 27, not 50 and yan yan is 19, not 9. it's almost pedophilic and sure as hell is infantilistic, especially since yan yan has had a bf before and must've done everything boyfriends do
otherwise a cute story
yvonne is the most old lady name ever. historical asian authors should put a tiny bit more work in finding not only real names, but also appropriate names.
yvonne is a french name and i have an aunt named that and she's pushing 70 and no man ever in the history of the whole europe was called yvonne ever
There's a masculine version
There's the masculine version of Yvonne, Yvon. Idk how seriously you should take this translation. This group uses a fair amount of mtl and tends to not edit. Some mistakes in the text aren't necessarily due to the author, but the subpar translation
didn't know that and it seems like it's not used at all compared to Yves (masc), Yvette (fem) or Yvonne (fem). tho it does exist, he will forever be a grandma to me
"look at me, i am a young teenage duke's daughter and i got abducted and freed myself and informed my maids of my abduction but they didn't inform my parents and authorities and neither did i and I'm going to investigate by myself, bc who else can find out the truth and save ppl from human trafficking other than a teenage, sheltered duke's daughter"
who tf is righting this nonsensical story? dropping it rn
So truuee x')
i hope he reneews his visa and stays there. or goes back to japan shortly and comes back to finland
she's a dumbass, i do understand her train of thought but it's a dumb train of thought
istg if she says "idk what you're talking about" I'm gonna have an aneurysm
the "trump card" pun is amazing