beta
i think this story would be better if the storytelling gets upgraded. the plot itself has potential and i get a prince simping over a beautiful and wise lady like ivorre but the way the story keeps panning over side characters and not establishing the interaction of the leads first makes it boring and uneventful. like the father and the tutor are obviously having an affair is predictable and yet that part wasn't even given conclusion like was she thrown out or not? bc she needs to go
i can't put my finger exactly where it feels like there should be more but for me it feels like i'm only seeing snippets of the main leads' relationship progress and more on the people around the main leads. feels like would they even develop something romantically if all i see is the maid and the brother for so many panels of a chapter? heck, even that wandering knight gets some spotlight for 3 or more chapters
i need to see a day of her doing her work as the lady of that castle and land, not about her maids and butlers gossiping about her life