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one comment stating that the uke is dumb. like bruh, when you signed the contract no way before you sign it you knew he tricks people. you witnessed it. then you signed the contract without thinking he might trick you or add to the contract. then get mad when he act based on the contract. literally you both agreed not to fall for each other that mean be as disconnected as possible. like what the fuck. then he suggested that he treat you more nicely and even admit that he was going it. i get it that the seme is a jerk and all so ya dont want to feel anything but i think asking for a space to think a bit. wait i just realize the author gave him no thoughts of his own. its always for someone else or about falling in love like what the hell. he is basically one track minded. and dont even get me started with the damn goblin. like he really is just the typical top. like plain as hell nothing about him is a green flag. like almost all ml leads that proclaim as selfish tops have the same thought process if not for worst like cant we have a different type. this whole story needs to be rewritten. it would have been way better if the bottom had a little back bone and that fake rational thinking or is it just me. and i dont mean swing or cursing being able to situated the situation at any given time. he can tell ghost are dangerous but deflect the part where the goblin is. and the fact that he thinks bad of himself make him as annoying . and i cant say i hate the way the story going cause i am going to still read it. it just confuses me why do some authors like making these types of characters. i will end up hating my own book for it and start over till they made sense first.