beta
with womp womp or its fiction.
so the first couple isnt bad i see worst but isnt good either. they eventually fell in love. great... but this is the first time i dont root for a bestfriends cp. like ugh they are so annoying. i guess its just me . the bestfriend did start it so he cant get mad. knowing his bestfriend is an assholle and selfish. like what the hell did he expect. he should have more reflecting time. or heed warning from the grapist and the uke having a stalker who eventually gets grape is just....ew. like the author must have one of those karma tropes. like i said before in another comment section not every story needs rape. like if he was into and pretending to be scared then thats fine but he is obviously traumatized. weathers he had hit the bastard or not. but the problem is if the dame guy have a force kink then at least see if he like it first its so sad if he gets trauma from that. and throwing grape in there like a joke.
UGH AGAIN I ENDED UP RAMBLING ON STORIES THAT COULD HAVE BEEN DECENT WITH OUT THE ATTEMPTS and rape i should have read the comments before reading im sad