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This story is about a man who fell in love with a witch he despised, and he changed the entire world...
The writing seems good (read the official's, the other chapters at the start have some Google Translate flavour to them), the art is lovely but somehow I am really not feeling the characters or the story itself.
It didn't manage to gimme that hooking factor that makes you wanna read more, you know?
I encourage to give it a try but I'll be dropping this. Just not interested, maybe a factor is the FL being blandly introduced and even in a dislikable way given this story is trying to be more realistic (aka: fuck helping others, I'll throw 'em to the wolves to save my ass - that's a very realistic but unlikable trait).
Again, writing and art seem decent, and I have big praise for the realistic fashion used (people rarely choose actual medieval dresses in these stories, so I adore that being a thing here). Check it out if you're into more realistic and more, let's say; 'natural' plotlines that don't throw something impressive your way to catch your interest for certain. It's a niche thing in writing, but maybe it'll scratch an itch for a lonely wanderer on here. :)