The writing is really not well thought through and honestly nonsensical half the time.
Not a fan of the character personalities (everyone feels weird or shallow somehow), art or overall plot that is often weird or random either. The translations being off in terms of grammar doesn't help either.
Younger readers can probably have a blast with this. But seasoned readers might wanna look for something else.
I would honestly prefer a hiatus over the art getting more wonky by the panel.
People gotta stop pushing things if they are not up for the work due to whatever reason. It'll not do the comic any favours. :(
The writing of this feels really off.
I could forgive the very obnoxious back and forth from past to present and rinse and repeat, over and over and OVER (without getting to the point in a good manner), but even that becomes unforgivable since it drags on for so long.
What bothers me most is the absolute misuse of that AND the miscommunication trope tho. As well as the character behavior: Both of them come across like acting to create a specific moment rather than a moment happening due to them behaving as the person they are. If that makes sense? It feels forced, shoe-horned and random at times even. As if the script didn't think through how to get to the next happening, but we had to get there, so we'll just force it within moments.
Both the MC and the ML have personalities that seem bland, again, as if their behavior is rooted in creating the next happening rather than a flowing and cohesive personality.
It's just strange. Tho the back and forth without getting anywhere and the annoying misunderstandings really does not help get a real feel for their actual perosnality.
It's an interesting story at the core, but the execution is anything but good. And I am certainly not a fan of the main plot basically being miscommunication/misunderstandings galore in and of itself, everything around is basically just a garnish.
Not really my thing due to these issues just overstaying their welcome WAY too much. But maybe you can enjoy it.
The art is decent, tho I noticed the artist has an issue with not being able to portray some expressions. But i know people can forgive that easily.
Check it out, give it a try. It's too annoying for my taste, but maybe you won't mind.
No unneeded drama, characters that feel realistic and a perfect fit for each other and the overall details are just right. Not too much bonking, not too little, plenty of life details but not too much to get boring.
Definitely a great read. I would have loved more chapters but it's great as is! <3
That’s how I felt reading this story too! The storytelling was executed really well and it was satisfying for a short story!
Glad I'm not alone~ <3
It looks like we have similar taste, so thanks for leaving thoughtful reviews! I’m looking forward to reading through them and finding more great stories!
You probably know Moscareto’s work already, but I recommend thier stories if you haven’t read them! I just finished reading season one of You Get Me Going/You and I can’t do this and throughly enjoyed it :-)
Aww, thank you very much~. <3 Just got finished with another comic and made a review, so maybe that's your thing as well. ^^
Oh yes! I have read two or so and have a few on hold from that author. So far only one A Pushover's Romance wasn't to my liking, but i think that's less Moscareto's fault than the comic adaptation itself creating the issues. I think the 3 or 4 others I started were good or great even (still haven't had time to finish them tho).
Punch Drunk Love and You and I can't Do This are the ones I'm currently trying to read, pesky updates from my favourite comics get in the way of that tho, as well as finding new, good stuff I can't stop reading in one go. X'D
Fingers crossed we'll get even more comics from that author, they have great talent for sure! ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Let's all back away slowly.
I heard the insane start to chase you if you run. (⊙…⊙ )
*the insane chases you*
You: *run faster*
*the insane runs even faster*
You: ahhhhhhh *jumps on a horse and books it*
Finally some good fucking food!
This better not turn into a mindless smuut fuckfest and ignore the great plotline it has. Or I'll be very upset. （￣へ￣）
See, this is the issue with expectations. XD
My mind saw the cover and thought I would get a lovely romance and family type situation, but the description tells me it'll be a messy fuckfest that I will not like.
I was really hoping to see something akin to a man getting involved with another, then the man's family decides to basically make the MC the new mom or something.
I'd really love to read that kinda thing right now. Instead, all I can find is dumb smut in the new uploads. ╥﹏╥
I am definitely used to the 'conveniently unalived parents' trope, but this is not the spot we usually jump into the story from. Let's treat the little bean well, okay? ╥﹏╥
Lost me within 1 chapter.
These kinda comics become the norm lately, that's sad.
The setup could have been really interesting but going for the good old fashioned and lazy route of:
- creep approaches
- creep molests MC
- MC says it's disgusting but he randomly gets a hard on like a hentai bitch
- they probably proceed to fuck because of the blackmail
You lost me with that shitty plot route. This has been done a hundred or a thousand times. Predictable, not likable and for anyone not reading to fap to it, just not interesting.
I know I shouldn't expect anything anymore from smut stories, but authors could at least pretend to be better than amateur porn plot writers. Just pretend. A tiny bit. :')
No gen for real, this could have gone in a way that ML like rescue MC here instead of being the actual molester. Then Idk ML giving MC another job if he's supposed to be rich or something like maybe be his sponsor or whatever a random job
I would honestly LOVE to see a plot like that.
I don't remember seeing a story even once that has this setup, but the ML turns from potential jerk to a genuine helping hand in the MC's troubles.
That would be so lovely to read. Helping someone out of trouble and then slowly falling in love because you genuine get to know each other and like each other. Would be so sweet. Makes it even weirder every author goes for the lazy bad porn plot route. There ARE options. Why is nobody using them?? ╥﹏╥
I was really hyped to not only see a bearded ML but also one that wasn't a jackass or had rape-y tendecies.
Then chapter 7 rolled in and that went out the window. Felt honestly like someone entirely different wrote that chapter, since it didn't align with his precious behavior at all.
Not my thing, lost all interest honestly. But maybe someone else can have a blast with it. ╮(￣▽￣)╭