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Really, and I mean REALLY not into this setup of: he cheated, so I'm just gonna try and forget and get back with him.

Been a while since I removed a comic from my reading list out of disappointment and lost interest despite the first good impression. :/

You lot have fun, I'mma bail~

Why tf is this so good??
I expected way less from the story. This is such a huge surprise!

Finally a comic worth hyping again! Amidst all the trash, there are gems sometimes~ <3

First of all, the story is VERY interesting and for a change this female lead seems likable and not the typical weird mess we see so often in these stories. XD
The art is decent too, but there are some issues that bother me:

There are too many random moments (why tf did ML suddenly go to the cafe bar and make a drink for her?? That was WAY out of character) and jump cuts/missed info. Or just things that are full on ignored (like the parents not wanting her to marry an old dude, wanting to check up who he is, but that never happened, they weren't even at the ball).

The male lead is a breath of fresh air in terms of design (he made me notice literal all MLs have the same eye type, wtf) and personality, but he still feels a bit shallow.
Not as shallow as the villain adoptive son tho. That character feels entirely like he just exists to be the bad guy and his behavior is based on acting to create a moment, not acting as he as a character would and then a moment happening. He's just NOT well written at all and the story makes it clear it doesn't care, he just exists to be hated. And that's not writing I'm fond of. Alongside with the plot-tool type behavior of course.

The overarching story is super interesting, but I really hope these flaws don't keep happeneing so much. It throws you off rhythm easily and some stuff is honestly annoying (time skipping after somewhat important moments especially).

Finally an author that doesn't make this a rape-y, mindcontrol-type setting! I love seeing a dom be interested in a partnership rather than just having a slave ready to fuck whenever. (I'm so sick of those stories.)
Can't believe how long it took for me to find a sub/dom-verse comic that actually uses the sub/dom setting to make a good story rather than just mindless smut. I love it~ <3

I wanna wait after seeing the glorious start of chapter 2 but part of me just wants to keep reading. marinating stuff is so annoying.

I am halfway through chapter 2 and I am heavily reminded why dating sims are such ass.
And this comic portrays the 'best' of the genre, showcasing why I cannot handle playing those cringey games. As much as i am starved for a good dating sim. XD

I love seeing stuff on my notification list that I have absolutely fucking NO idea I what it is because the thumbnail changed randomly. :D

At one point I considered it being insomnia that causes the dark circles under his eyes. Especially as leader.

Insomnia can VERY quickly cause mental issues, weird behavior and even physical damage. So him being a little kooky makes sense.

Still not gonna abandon my deity/soul theory tho. Maybe those can have insomnia too. XD

Please just take a hiatus, the art is getting worse BY THE PANEL.

Don't sabotage yourself further. ╥﹏╥

I just started reading so I gotta ask: Is it just me or does the ML have some really Uncanny Valley vibes going on with his face? (Eyes and the expression.)

Something feels really off about him and I personally would nope tf outta there if someone wide-eye stared at me like he does. X'D

I wonder if the small ghosts and the big one are all from the same life, just each desire (to confess, to kiss, etc.) has a different weight in the old Yuuma's existence, hence manifesting as smaller and weaker ghosts and one large one because being with Hayato was THE biggest desire.