Not gonna lie; I was expecting a Aizen (pre-glow-up) X Gin doujinshi when I saw that thumbnail/cover. XD
I know a bitc-, I mean, troublemaking gentleman, when I see one.
This redhead better not screw our bean over. He needs head pats and appreciation if anything. So please refrain, good sir. (〜￣△￣)〜
Somehow the story feels unfinished to me.
The plot was going well but the conclusion just happened somehow too swiftly, then it was just happy ending, here's the credits.
This would have benefitted more from the MC actually going through a smal arc of realizing his feelings more and them having a conversation before bonking and the credits rolling in.
The base story is nice, something new tbh. We rarely get to see an office worker top being a total slut and just being SO casual about it, like some men simply are irl. He feels realistic in that sense. His persistence is bordering between stalker and eccentric(?) and that makes him quite unique. XD
I love the love interest but I wish we could have seen him more vulnerable and opening up, maybe actually crying and telling his story before the credits roll. That would have been perfect for the small, heavy feeling moments that we got with him.
It's flawed for sure, but I think it could have been great with a bit of adjustments.
Definitely like it tho, despite it being smut heavy. Tho it IS well balanced between smut and actual story. That is a big plus, want more of this in comics tbh.
Recommended for a casual read with lots of smut in it but also some story, but don't try to look for anything deep and detailed.
The main story is really nice. I like the characters and their romance and behavior. Simple, sweet and to the point. But I would have loved to see more of them. Tho I guess that's not a must if the story really IS simple as that. So it's fine by me. ^^
The second story had me switch back n forth between WTF and the usual gleeful cheering for a funny delinquent story. I really LOVE the action parts and deeper dialogue moments but the constant mention with the shitting situation just to see a glimpse of his face threw me off each time. I am NOT into that stuff. But it definitely was funny. XD
This was way too short, it was SO good! XD
This author has great skill when it comes to hilarious comedy moments with perfectly matching expressions/reactions from the characters. 2 comics so far seem worthy of becoming animes.
This one is a good read for sure. Short but gold. The story is simple and on point, with a focus on comedy. Worth every moment, but that's it: It's WAY too short! I want more! ╥△╥
First things first, alternate title of this is: HORNY JAIL HIGHSCHOOLER
This was a worth read, the comedy and art paired with it is definitely the highlight of this comic tho. I can't stop laughing at the dumbness and expressions. XD
The romance is ok, but the main focus is DEFINITELY comedy and it just being a literal 'horny jail' themed fun little read. Which is exactly what you should treat it as; a comedy, not a realistic story to get emotionally invested in or such.
If judging the story outside the comedy factor, it's very odd since it's so random, even with the happy ending. But the comedy factor makes it work regardless. So I wouldn't say it's a clear fault/issue. :)
The only thing I can really name as an issue to me is that the ending is not as impactful compared to the comedy before? It might have been that way to me because the comedy was so impactful compared to the feeling parts, but I'm not sure. Maybe it was just too short to unfold it's impact well.
Definitely worth reading, if you need a laugh or a bit of a time waster that's actually memorable, this will be to your liking.
Recommended for sure, so give it a try!
send help, can't stop laughing, I'm wheezing and crying! This is so hilariously dumb, I can't handle this. XD
I'll make it short: wholesome, interesting, cute romance, good art and love the delinquent factor since it brings in some action and more comedy moments. XD
A great read, especially since this is a light read and not some deep story attempt. COULD have been a bit longer tho. I would have loved to see more of all these characters.
Oh, and the random side(?) couple being a switch was nice. Was like encountering a unicorn. :) Kinda wish it would have been about the delinquent group bosses instead tho. I think they could make a fun couple with exactly that relationship dynamic too. XD
First of all: This was an unexcpected ride. I need MUCH more semes/tops/MLs with his kind of personality. That was such a nice change to what we usually see. XD
Very minor spoiler-ish things mentioned, so beware.
The story is definitely a casual, light read, nothing to get overly realistic about. And it does it's job well in that.
The only issue I find is that they could have worked on the MLs supposed social anxiety more before he switches up (especially the jump to acting that was way too sudden kinda). Tho even the MC could have had a better transition for no interest to horny at the beginning. Tho it DID make for a funny shocking surpise turn of events. I gotta admit that caught me off guard, as did the MLs personality when it happened. His expression and dialogue made me laugh. XD
They are both lovely characters, the story is interesting and even the surrounding characters are all precious (wish there was more screentime for them tho, the manager was hilarious at the beginning).
Definitely recommended. Has it's issues but nothing major. And both characters are fully likable, so it's a nice nice all-round if you're not looking for 100% perfection and deep topics. :)
Why was this over way too quick!? I wanted more of them! XD
The characters both feel very realistic but still idealized for a semi-comedy setting, which I am very fond of. Both have flaws and strongpoints, but somehow i wish we could have known them a bit more in a personal sense. I wouldn't say they feel shallow, just that we only saw the surface because that was all the plot needed to work for the romance. A bit more immersion would have been nice tho.
Love the story tho. The mild comedy and weirdness of them interacting in any way was decently done. Could have done even better with more detail to characters and maybe some dates and happy or cute moments. Maybe some slightly sad heart to heart talk at one point. But I suppose the author wanted to keep it simple and light as a read, which the endresult did perfectly so.
Might not be everyone's thing, but I'd suggest reading it and giving it a try. It's no grand romance or such, but definitely something you can read when bored or just want to browse new content.