First of all, the art is great and the overall writing nice, but the core story and character relationship is really dumb at best and nonsensical at least.
This is one of those stories that is just nonsensical to me because what they are isn't people in love but rather just fuck buddies who got the weird eureka moment to call themselves a couple/lovers, despite that not being the relationship they have. They like fucking and that's it. Which means: if any of them DO meet a person they actually fall for, this relationship goes to shit faster than you and I can blink. Turning them, basically, into the shitty ex/untrustworthy player character of other stories that we all hate. XD
If at least the writing was done in a way to indicate they actually fell for each other, it would change things, but what little 'feelings' there are are either made by horniness or feel incredibly shoehorned at best. It just doesn't feel anything but shallow. And again; a weird choice to decide to 'date' when that isn't really what they should be doing.
The art is nice, has funny moments and lots of fap material I suppose, but the story in terms of romance is really just non existent if we look at it in detail and not through the lense of reading a BL comic, so the characters MUST love each other per default.
Not my thing, tho the art is great. Check it out i guess but I honestly wouldn't recommend it because of the 'romance' in it. If you're just looking for dudes bonking and being weird and kinda dumb, this might be your jam tho.
The main story is honestly something I'd like to see more often. It's a really adorable concept and gives room for lots of story options!
As for the writing, it's a bit too neglected in the falling-in-love corner of things, because that somehow just happened from one moment to the next without any explaination, which made my personal score a little lower for it than it could have been with extra effort in that part of the story.
The second story is also really great! With this one the falling in love had already happened but it makes sense and doesn't need explaining. And seeing them work it out, with all the comedic moments and cute chibi art is just nice. <3
A very adorable couple and character dynamic, can't get enough of seeing this type tbh.
The last story (chapter 5) is honestly weird. Nevermind the age gap, this story too just jumps from 'no feelings (apparently anyway)' to 'here is a marriage proposal'. There was not a hint of any actual romance going on. Granted, it was a oneshot, but even so there was opportunity to showcase the odd romance going on. It just felt random. Not to mention weird, considering the age gap and IF they both wanted to marry each other, it would mean both had feelings for the other previously (so pre-15 year old character B). And I suppose most can agree that's not exactly a story people like. I know it's different in asia, but still: be warned that this is likely worth skipping if you don't care for seeing a 15 year old X 25(?) year old in a random romance happenstance thingy.
Would highly recommend this comic! But again, likely skip the last if you aren't into the age gap thing going on there and prefer good writing. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I'm usually not a fan of stories that start when the couple is already together and fully in love and all, but this was really adorable on all fronts. The art was beautiful and being able to see the recipes is actually really a nice extra, I'll be trying to cook some of these in the future. :)
The overall writing is really good but I think the translations are a bit lacking and likely made some mistakes in moments that made the emotional aspect or impact of dialogue a little watered out.
All in all a lovely story tho and the ending was really precious.
Might not be everybody's cup of tea who's looking for more than fluff and a simple story, but I think these are worth reading every once in a while. So I'd recommend this one for that occassion.
It says ongoing and feels like it too, but here's my current (vol.1 ch.5.5) mini review anyway. :)
This is all-round a decent comic tbh. Art, writing, characters, everything's really good. It could maybe do with it actually being more emotionally impactful, so it feels like they are actually in love and not just horndogs, but then again, some guys irl are just like that. XD
Would say it's worth checking out, so give it a try!
Definetly a worthy follow up to the first story, love it.
I can tell the author is either not comfortable or not too creative in the smut department, hence the bonking scene was a bit bland, but that is about the only issue I can find here. Well, I would have prefered seeing the MC go to a hospital to check his head, but oh well. XD
Yet again another sweet romance with an interesting story attached to it. I really like it.
Worth reading, tho I think it's a must to read the first comic before this. Otherwise it might feel more bland since you don't get to know the characters and all that.
Give it a go, not a must read but certainly not a waste of time if you're looking for something simple and sweet with a nice storyline.
The base story is really great, I DID think they were highschoolers tho, not adults. Don't think I ever saw adult delinquents except in yakuza comics. That kinda came out of left field. XD
The art is lovely, the characters nice, the story really interesting and wholesome and overall writing is very well done I would say.
I honestly have nothing to complain about. It used everything it had well, just to the right amount, and wasn't weirdly paced.
Definitely worth reading, maybe even a must read for those looking for a fun little romance that's both wholesome and funny.
(I also agree with other posters; this is anime worthy!)
I honestly love this. FINALLY a sub/dom without any creepy, rape-y undertones or blatant plot tropes. We need more of this! <3
The story itself is incredibly interesting, but I do think it was really rushed. The jump from testing the waters to both of them dating was really random and came out of nowhere, so them 'falling in love' somehow didn't really register. Kinda fell flat and made it feel shallow in terms of emotional impact and immersion. That could have been done better I think.
BUT! It's still a good read. Both characters are lovely and interesting and the story and art definitely worth experiencing I would say.
Give it a try, I don't think it's a regrettable choice to read it. :)
The story itself as a base setup is EXACTLY what I always wanted, but it having such creepy, nonsensical and quite frankly rape-y aspects to it make it more of a dissapointment than me screaming with joy. That made it meh, because this is literally the exact same nonsense as a typical smut hentai: abandoning all reason because the MC randomly feels good and then becomes an obedient cocksleeve. XD
Great fap material. Great disappointment for those who hoped for something like a romance even in a very small way.
The art is really great btw, some really interesting poses, angles and so on. Could have done without the dumb smut ahega-ho faces tho.
Give it a try, but don't expect more than just fucking. Because that's all it is. Sadly.
I know I shouldn't judge it based on this alone but...the anatomy of this is ALL over not just one place, but all the places. It makes this equally as unpleasant to read as the story itself. Or maybe even more if I'm honest. There is neither consistency nor quality control and sometimes some panels look either like multiple people worked on the art or some panels are heavily referenced or even traced from something else (one kissing panel and some feet come to mind here).
Not gonna waste my time with this and I can't recommend this to anyone either.