Let's all back away slowly.
I heard the insane start to chase you if you run. (⊙…⊙ )
Finally some good fucking food!
This better not turn into a mindless smuut fuckfest and ignore the great plotline it has. Or I'll be very upset. （￣へ￣）
See, this is the issue with expectations. XD
My mind saw the cover and thought I would get a lovely romance and family type situation, but the description tells me it'll be a messy fuckfest that I will not like.
I was really hoping to see something akin to a man getting involved with another, then the man's family decides to basically make the MC the new mom or something.
I'd really love to read that kinda thing right now. Instead, all I can find is dumb smut in the new uploads. ╥﹏╥
I am definitely used to the 'conveniently unalived parents' trope, but this is not the spot we usually jump into the story from. Let's treat the little bean well, okay? ╥﹏╥
Lost me within 1 chapter.
These kinda comics become the norm lately, that's sad.
The setup could have been really interesting but going for the good old fashioned and lazy route of:
- creep approaches
- creep molests MC
- MC says it's disgusting but he randomly gets a hard on like a hentai bitch
- they probably proceed to fuck because of the blackmail
You lost me with that shitty plot route. This has been done a hundred or a thousand times. Predictable, not likable and for anyone not reading to fap to it, just not interesting.
I know I shouldn't expect anything anymore from smut stories, but authors could at least pretend to be better than amateur porn plot writers. Just pretend. A tiny bit. :')
My guess would be the theory of him being the source for the chaos of the world.
If he thrives and creates chaos, it would make sense it has a negative effect on him to recieve love and affection. Maybe even making him vomit.
His strange monologue infront of the mirror is odd tho. So far he didn't seem to be the fake type narcissist.
waittttt you're onto something omg
Glad to hear that my idea isn't too outlandish sounding. ^^
I think the base story is good but the execution is just really lacking, it feels too random.
Maybe with giving it some more chapters and emotional detail it could have worked. Or maybe by making it more comedy-focused. That could have also shifted the story for the better.
This just felt too random as it is now.
Do like the base idea tho. I think showing an orphan turned criminal and someone who's concerned about them and tries to chase them down to give them a normal life again is a really neat concept. There's plenty of potential with that sorta setup.
TF is wrong with the ex?
Why degrade the lover he's very obviously hooked on, given he immediately came running back.
I don't get why he would call the MC a pig, fat, etc.. He's just not the typical body builder ripped, but he IS build.
I'd honestly love seeing body types like his more: Muscles but also still fat on them to look natural. That looks just WAY more attractive than 0% body fat ripped dudes. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
No unneeded drama, characters that feel realistic and a perfect fit for each other and the overall details are just right. Not too much bonking, not too little, plenty of life details but not too much to get boring.
Definitely a great read. I would have loved more chapters but it's great as is! <3