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ReviewRaptor June 29, 2024 12:38 pm

First things first: This is smut (it's tagged as ecchi for some reason). Smut is essentially only about fucking and portraying it as much as possible. And as per usual for this genre; there is only minimal story to this. XD Not your thing? Then better look for something else to read.

The art is above average based on my standards. It cannot carry but it doesn't have to since the sex scenes are essentially doing that. There are very great panels tho, especially the poses are done very well and in a creative way instead of sticking to basics.

There is a mild amount of story, but not much tbh. Works to make it a coherrent story instead of just a collection of porking moments. The story is interesting at it's core, but didn't get integrated enough to make this more than just smut. There IS comedy, but really not enough to warrant the tag tbh.
Romance is certainly there but I think it wasn't done well as they jump from one moment to another suddenly being in love, whereas we have really only seen the seme develope feelings for a TINY moment (kinda like love at first sight, but it's only briefly mention). The MC literally goes from 'nah' to 'omg of course I love you!'. Without literally anything indicating the change, even it being in the same exact chapter while all that happened was irrelevant talking and fucking. X'D

I think this is very good wank material since there is so much detailed smut and it's even done with a romantic storyline, but it doesn't work as a regular read for someone who might be interested in an actual story being there.
Personally I am not a fan of the uke's really weird and ugly looking random drooling (it could have been drawn much better tbh), it even randomly vanishes or appears from one moment to another, which is really weird. But oh well.

I think this would have been an exceptional story if the author had put equal effort into the storyline of romance and living, interacting with one another and working and so on instead of just focusing on smut. But it is great as a smut work, that's for sure!

I'd recommend this to people looking for fap material but not for those looking for an actual story. Might be a bit much for newcomers so I'd say mid to experienced readers could like this if they are looking for something light and simple. :)


It ultimately depends on each person's taste. So give it a try. ^^

ReviewRaptor June 28, 2024 9:50 pm

Why is it that most of the poses look like they were created with a wooden manekin or an anime action figure that hardly moves it's joints? XD

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ReviewRaptor June 21, 2024 10:40 pm

Just finished reading Groan and it made me want to read a story or two about characters that ran away from home and live on the streets or homeless for years that meet a person that takes them in. Be it in a transactional-fucking type of way or simply because they want to help the person.
Also doesn't matter if the story is about a homeless MC or love interest.

Would very much love something similar to Groan with a Mafia member as the one who takes them in, but it can be literally anyone: A shop owner or someone that was tasked with taking them in by their boss or friend.
I'm not too fond of the people having known each other before, but I'll take a look if they were just acquaintances instead of having a close relationship ( I simply prefer relationships starting when I read them, not it having happened already).

Any recommendets are greatly appreciated! <3

Morohtar May 30, 2024 12:38 am

I'm looking for recommendations of the make-over kind. As in; someone gets their hair cut or changes appearance over quite some years and interacts with someone they'll then get into a relationship with.

I know I have seen a few around, and I read one earlier that somewhat applied to the make-over aspect but I'm interested in reading other stories.

Pretty sure there are plenty but I can only remember one story about a hairdresser who took over his father's shop and a student who's hair he cuts who then becomes a model.

Thanks in advance for any recommendations, new and old alike! <3

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Just here to read stuff in my abundant free-time and leave reviews.
I know people get their panties in a twist about hearing critiques of a story they like, but I honestly do not care, this is what a comments section is for among just leaving cute little gushing-comments. :P

Very much addicted reader of stories with at least upper mid to highest quality artwork and decent and GOOD, detailed and well thought through writing (hard to find as they are).

I read right about anything regarding genres. But tend to avoid chinese works as they have too many issues that annoy me (like the literal random chibi haha moments when the story has ZERO need for it).

I read stories even if I do NOT like them. To some extend anyway, so I can leave at least a review for the basics.


As a reminder: Even if we disagree or actually get into a verbal fight, I'll not hate you or go apeshit like some people on this website and others (unless you defend hardcore rape or necrophilia and pretend it's good, something is wrong with you, so I will definitely not like you on any level).
Having a heated arguement or simply having different opinions on something is perfectly fine, no hard feelings and it won't really matter to me past that arguement. I can get into an arguement on one story and on the next we both read we can happily chat or calmly discuss. I honestly do not care enough to 'keep a grudge' or whatever. I am capable of leaving emotions in a disagreement and move on. I'm not like my mom who keeps things in her mental pocket for 30 years and throw at you when you speak to me again. =_=

Anyways, have a nice day and have fun reading!
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