
I have kept reading this story, waiting for it to be interesting, up until chapter 14 -- I now give up. The MC is a doormat, the seme is the stereotypical toxic arsehole. The characters lack all personality, there is no humor, drama, or tension in the plot, and the characters are fairly bland looking. That last bit about the characters looking bland, I would forgive if the plot was interesting or the characters had … well, character... but there isn't even any eye candy to keep me reading.

Jeebus, these amateurs, just dousing the bedsheets and blankets in lubricant! Throw a damn towel down! Also, why yank the beads out like that? The pleasure is in their slow removal! Lastly, I kind of want to see the uke top from the bottom or something, to take some initiative. He's always pulling that yaoi trope of acting like he doesn't want it, when (this time, at least,) it is clear he does! Still love the story, though. Despite my bitching.
Random question here, but has either female character ever actually had an orgasm while having sex with the MC? I can't think of a single time either has, although I sometimes just skip the repetitive sex parts of the story. Jonathan is supposed to be some stud these two girls are fighting over, but being able to have sex repeatedly in one session isn't all that impressive if only HE is getting off. Also, it seems like Sophie had sex with him manipulatively last time, as if her sexual prowess and not her personality is the most important part of her. And she has sex not even just for fun or her own pleasure, and that makes me sad, because I like her. Honestly, I'm not even sure why I keep reading this story. It aggravates the piss out of me.
Well thats because straight sex doesn't really feel good for women most of the time.
Uh, what? Don't know you, don't know your gender or sexual orientation, so I don't wanna assume anything about you, but if you think straight sex doesn't feel good for women, then you have little knowledge of the vast amount of pleasure of which the female body is capable! Educate yourself, my dear, either for your or someone else's pleasure, or your own edification.
why r ppl telling u that ur wrong UR RIGHT ?????
you have a huge point!! literally anyone could pull up a straight couple porno and 9/10 the woman won’t orgasm it’s so sad...
They never said straight sex was NEVER enjoyable for women they just stated more often than not it isn't as pleasurable for women. Maybe comprehend before you go off on a rant.
No, I fully understood what the commenter said: they didn't say never, they said MOST OF THE TIME, which is an untrue, vast generalization without any statistical context. For a bunch of people looking at heterosexual pornographic drawings on a website, you seem to have no sex positivity. Women are entirely capable of enjoying PiV sex (if that is your narrow view of "straight sex," which I am guessing it is,) and are perfectly capable of orgasming from it, assuming no physical impediments or emotional trauma are keeping them from doing otherwise. But straight sex, as it were, also includes cunnilingus, which is one of the main ways in which women orgasm, as it is the best for clitoral stimulation. Has Jonathan gone down on either Yuna or Sophie? Not that I can recall, because he is only concerned for his own pleasure and is a poor lover. If a woman isn't enjoying sex, she needs a different partner. And for the love of the gods, don't compare real sex to pornography. Most pornography is for the male-gaze, not for females. If you want sex positive porno where the women actually enjoy themselves, as they should, look it up. It exists. Because women are entirely capable of enjoying sex. I swear, are you people teenagers? Because you seem to lack basic sex education and think sex negativity somehow makes you feminists. Embrace sexuality -- like I said, you ARE in fact reading a heterosexual porno.
The people telling her that’s wrong are insecure men lmao
But I actually really agree with your statement
I am bisexual so I have experienced both and honestly this is correct
Lol
The ‘insecure men’ thing was the joke btw lmao
Yeah, I'm likely much older than a lot of people who use this site, sex positive, and pansexual, so I suppose my experiences are vastly different.
Lol, insecure men, indeed! Or the toxic-masculine type!
yup
....slow clapping
Stop I almost dropped my croissant