
Hey uploader, I appreciate your uploading. Can I ask that you be a bit more cognizant of the cuts, though? They are making the story harder to follow and marring the artwork.
The story is hard enough to follow because the author has apparently decided not to give us information and dialogue that explains anything. LOL.

Don't get me wrong -- I like the main characters, I like the art style, and I like the smut. But the plot (or lack thereof) is starting to kill my enjoyment. There seems to be no overarching plot whatsoever. This story is meandering. There are momentary conflicts, sure, but nothing has been set up to be the "main plot" other than their love story, which has little to no tension in it. I wouldn't want the author to do some trope like one of them thinking the other is cheating on him or some misunderstanding causing them to break up when a minute long conversation could save the situation, but right now it is just meandering from one minor plot point to another. I need tension. I need longing. I need emotions other than gentleness, sexiness, and cuteness.
What even is the overall story about? Have I forgotten because of the time it has taken to be written and posted? Or are others of you out there also wondering what's actually getting resolved when the story concludes? As I said, thus far nothing has really been set up as important enough to conclude the manga.

I get why there are placeholders, so don't come for me. The thing is, the site still trawls the internet or someone else uploads the translated chapters anyway, and I end up reading them, so all these placeholders and their subsequent Official Tranlsations are not getting read (by me) and just giving me false update notifications. I wish the website would allow someone to take charge of the story (like Seph) and let them take care of uploads. I've learned not to even bother with the official translations because by the point they come out, I've already read that chapter. Kind of sucks that the website can't let Seph do their thing, but also kind of sucks because I can't wait to read the officials when I can read the (easily understandable if not official) translated chapters. Mangago won't, but they ought to make this easier for uploaders.

Yeah, this story is just straight up rape made to look "sexually appealing." The plot has becomes nonexistent.
It didn't used to bother me as much in yaoi, but the number of stories that perpetuate the "you enjoyed it, so it isn't rape" myth really demeans the real-life survivors of rape who have to deal with the shame of having felt pleasure during their assault. It's fairly common, because the body sometimes responds whether the mind wants it to or not -- for both men and women.
So this poor dude is getting regularly assaulted, his mind tormented because he now has Stockholm syndrome and his body responds to being raped despite his heart and mind wanting it to end, and the other dude is unforgivable in his violence and in how he demeans him, breaking his mind further.
At this point, the only ending I will accept is if he kills his rapist, whether he dies or flees doesn't matter. The rapist must die.

I’ll never understand why people still complain like this in the comment section of a yaoi read. You saw the tags and you saw the other comments so you knew what you were getting in to. Don’t you ever get tired of ranting “oh but real life victims” blah blah blah… (thankfully) this is not real life.
If it bothers you so much, maybe you should stop reading (most) yaoi. Switch to a softer genre, perhaps?

I'll never understand why people respond to criticism as if they were the author and they're having Big Feels about why someone would want less RAPE and more PLOT in a STORY. When I started this story, how was I to know that it would turn into a rape fest? I started from the very first chapter ever translated. No one knew what the story would contain at that time, you twit, except the author. I mean, do you think I can see the future? And for a while there, it seemed there would be an actual plot.
Most yaoi has a seme who can be redeemed or has some glimmer of humanity, so no, I shan't stop reading all yaoi because I complain about this single story on this site.
If it bothers you so much to read criticism, maybe you should stop reading (most) comments on stories. Switch to reading your own glorious praise of rape, perhaps?

...complaining about this being on the Mangago's homepage! :D It's on the homepage because it is popular (I guess, since it is in that section!) Apparently a lot of us got drawn into clicking on it to see what the fuck it was about, I guess, or else people actually like it, which given it's rating, might be true. I read the first two chapters just to see, and the premise is so ridiculous. Might as well be the "Oh no, pizza guy, I can't pay!" porno prompt from a scantily clad lady in a 70s porn to a mustachioed goofball in a Domino's hat. But to be fair, I've seen worse plots in yaoi. And tv. And movies. And classical literature. I won't be reading it, but reading the comment section has been hilarious!
Every time I get a notification, I've forgotten already that he calls her "Heeya." And every time, when I read "Heeya" again for the first time, I get the OutKast song stuck in my head, "Hey Ya," and I can't stop thinking about him clapping her cheeks in time to the clapping in the song.
Shake it like a polaroid picture.
whenever i read heeya, i think about cowboys saying that as they ride off with their horse "heeya!"