Jealousy (Cheonghu)

Ongoing | Cheonghu | 2000 released
2024-02-16 00:40 marked
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It's... not bad but it could be better.

The relationship feels off and from what I understand it's because the first volume missed a lot more chapters than the one translated.
Still regardless of that this doesn't exactly feel like a Poly Webtoon, as it never actually focus on their life all three of them.

It's Poly of "title" but that's it.
Now, don't get me wrong, I know some Poly relationship are about two people dating one while being on a platonic relationship with each other and I don't have issues about that.
The issue is that it just doesn't feel like a Poly webtoon because when there's one the other is always busy doing something else or maybe the protagonist is going through something and focus more on being jealous about the black haired guy but the white haired guy completely disappeared for more than one chapter, then the black haired guy disappear and the white haired guy plus the MC go for it.
It doesn't feel Poly at all, it feels like two different couples or parallel universe couples where in one "route" he went for the white haired guy and in the other he went for the black haired guy.

I'm currently following the development of a game which people might know or not that is called Our Life 2 where the game (this is public information not Patreon exclusive) have a better portrayal of platonic poly relationship between Tamarack and Qiu in their adulthood than black hair and white hair than this Webtoon do, and that feature for polygamy isn't even out yet but it's already a better portrayal of friends dating the MC and equally spending all time together than those three do where it feels more like it's a classic two people couple and it alternates between guys instead of seeing them maybe sleeping together cuddling with him or stuff like that, even if they only like the MC.

Still it's just off, and it's even more off how they don't even actually want the poly relationship but at the same time yes but in the end it's just not a poly relationship but two guys indulging the guy that can't make a choice.

It isn't bad, but it doesn't feel like a Poly ship and it doesn't make sense how they feel so against having to share, as if it lacks communication.

Neither one of the two guys wants to share the MC but put up with it instead of actually reaching that common ground and from being friends they went back at not standing each other, or literally not even interacting at all.
The platonic part of this poly relationship is just as important as the romantic side of it because they are all a couple, but the two guys are a platonic couple as for their relationship with the MC it's romantic.

Superior Day

Complete | team getname | 2000 released
2022-12-20 07:32 marked
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The vote might change, I'm still not done reading it, but I just want to say something.
The Hitman want him dead, he knows where he live and a gun can make it easier for him, he's used to kill so he won't hesitate to kill him as soon as he see him.
As he said a gun is easier to use so for someone used to kill he will shoot him as soon as he see him with one shot or maybe more, but still since there's a distance and the need of understanding what's happening from the killer side he will be dead or unable to move before he can attack the Hitman.
Getting some random dude who's clearly afraid and unable to hold a gun or look like he's not scared to kill the serial killer is just stupid and too risky.

Maybe there's a reason for that I don't know, but to me it just doesn't make sense.
Even if he actually kill him (which unless it's a story that start from the end and then make a flashback that show us to how things ended up like that) it's still to risky just let a random guy do it and doesn't make sense at least for now if there's a explanation.

Also the guy looks like a cool version of the doc from back to the future or Rick if he wasn't constantly drinking, or the main character of Stains Gate but older for some reason.

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