i don't wanna be the buzzkill........ but. the femme said no like multiple times. this isn't a call out for anyone to immediately stop enjoying this story, but a bit of recognition wouldn't hurt.
rereading the second chapter just to make myself cry bc her mom saying she's sorry and she will love her forever and lily bursting out crying because she realizes it isn't a dream, all of that will never not be the best part of this story as whole
i really like this story, like a lot, but if i had to have a complaint its that they don't seem to talk naturally in some scenes, i understand saying what you feel, but to me it's like they're just telling it for the audience and not each other
they're both so similar, i wonder what the FL's breaking point is going to be