judging by the comments, I think we have all forgotten how a story without too much drama can exist and that it can contain something happy and beautiful without any distortion behind it ... I don't know if this is good or bad, especially in big stories something like this (drama) has to be done otherwise they end up fast like this one since there aren't many different thingies that can happen in a relatively calm and happy story.. but ya I think this one has quite many holes in it but I will wait for the last one that might fill some up somehow (⌒▽⌒)
judging by the comments, I think we have all forgotten how a story without too much drama can exist and that it can contain something happy and beautiful without any distortion behind it ... I don't know if this is good or bad, especially in big stories something like this (drama) has to be done otherwise they end up fast like this one since there aren't many different thingies that can happen in a relatively calm and happy story.. but ya I think this one has quite many holes in it but I will wait for the last one that might fill some up somehow (⌒▽⌒)