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It felt like not enough BL in a BL manga. Like there was so little couple moments (because 99percent of the story there was no couple). Also the moments between the second couple, like those monologues especially from li yibai were so cheesy at times, he feels like an edgy character.
I would have prefered to give more screen time to the main couple, especially show them ask each other out to start dating (because we never got that, like wtf), rather than adding the plot with the second couple. And just make another manga that would have been centered around the second couple