
It felt like not enough BL in a BL manga. Like there was so little couple moments (because 99percent of the story there was no couple). Also the moments between the second couple, like those monologues especially from li yibai were so cheesy at times, he feels like an edgy character.
I would have prefered to give more screen time to the main couple, especially show them ask each other out to start dating (because we never got that, like wtf), rather than adding the plot with the second couple. And just make another manga that would have been centered around the second couple

I wanted it to succeed, unfortunately the story dragged in some parts which didn't need to be (yes you love sex, yes he turns into a dog if you don't kiss, etc) they as if were having a couple of the same chapters. Not to mention i am still confused how the sister remembered and talked about yuke's childhood crush and not the yuke himself, i was facepalming so hard.
I did like the story in the core but execution was lacking.
I mean the grim reaper was more interesting than the main couple, i wanted to see him start dating some guy (maybe the blond animal cafe boy)

So we didn't get an actual end? Also there was no resolution between the crossdresssing streamer and the totally straight bestie of the mc. Also no resolution between sister of mc and the ginger girly.
President mo you deserve so much better, come to me, on me, with me. I will let you top (unlike a selfish someone) (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

4, could have been 5 if he ended up with junseo or if karam had a better part. Only got that karam is strong and nice. Karam got 2 words about him while junseo had an encyclopedia. Literally thought that the mc might end up with junseo.
Write more about the LI or it will feel off kinda.
I still liked the ending because they look kinda cute together, maybe it will be better in the future.

Can we now have a continuation of other guys' stories, especially Seonyeon's. His actions were twisted and i don't like s&m and that sadistic stuff ( ̄ε(# ̄)Σ, but when he showed his true colors, i think i would fall for that guy (and he's a seke, biggest plus) ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄ . Also that ginger friend was fun, i want him to find a soulmate.(⌒▽⌒)
This was an amazing story, thank you. ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~
They should have said that they found a way for the mc to reincarnate along with the li, they shouldn't have made it so open. Or maybe they have given a sneak peak at their next life bodies, that could have also been a sneak peak for a future manga, where they actually get to meet again and fall for each other all over again. I think that would be very sweet