it's weird how they portray as someone very smart but he seems to make a lot of mistakes ?
i'm not smart enough to know how to not do them but i feel like it's possible
whenever he's moving he doesn't seem to care much about cameras, having an alibi, or disguising himself at all
he seems to take a lot of risk
i mean when he was following sakamoto and misumi in the taxi, he was being plain obvious
also, he was talking to misumi in a 'disguise' but misumi didn't recognize him at all ? meh
also, i don't know a lot about criminals, but the author portrays those criminals as the absolute worst pieces of trash ever. all of them. like how could they not fake, even a little bit, being not such douchebags (understatement obv)
it seems so white and black to me. how sakamoto was like ehhehehehhhh i wish i fucking hurt her more
like why would he say that to a random stranger
Well, no character can be more clever than the author.
Also, it IS weird how rushed he is to get his revenge, even though he's already been waiting for so long. The pacing is like a thriller-caper revenge movie that has to get everything done in one desperate gasp of action.
i guess i'm used to mangas with extremely smart characters that always surprise me. so it's a bit surprising to find a guy that's a bit more 'usual'/'basic'
yeah ! so he did baba, why was he in such a rush to kill sakamoto that he had to expose himself a bit and seem suspicious to people ? and then he killed him when he knew there was a camera. i'm sure he would have found a way to get to him eventually without showing himself so much
he was acting super weird with okeda and misumi, i get that he's trying to get clues, but does he think they're stupid ? that they won't ever get it ? he's being so careless
It could be that because he waited so long and he got an amazing power, that he couldn't hold back. His brain is filled with revenge and the police are on to him so he was bound to make mistakes
i was about to say i don't get ryoutarou's character at all
but actually what i do not have a single clue about is what his relationship with hibiki is
it's so mysterious and i just can't comprehend it
i really don't get how hibiki feels about him, she seems to have pretty normal relationships with other people, but their relationship is... really something
i don't mean it in a bad way, it's really interesting to see that weird relationship and try to understand their dynamics from their interactions
i completely forgot, but what's up with her name ? lucia and vivian
Lucia is her name when she pretends to be maid ig
ohh ok, but why would she be lying when she uses vivian ?
isn't it her princess name aka her actual real name ?
ahhh okay kay, thank you so much !
i read this a really long time ago
it is not the best story but it definitely has a special place in my heart
the characters seem to be too white/black and the story seems pretty cliche
blonde dude is a super asshole to everyone for 'no reason' (ok he likes the girl but it feels pretty cliché) and even to the girl he likes
rn the girl is a bit annoying ? feels like she's just going to be a wallflower for the mc to pick at the end
op is the nice oblivious kinda bullied guy
it's a shame cause the premise seemed pretty cool, to write your experience in the notebook
but i feel like they could have developed that more and added more interesting stuff to it
True I feel the same the characters seem lackluster and too one-sided. The current villain is too petty that I don't feel any threat about him it just feels like he's a pathetic whiny child who can't get his toys.
Alas maybe it gets better in the future chapters it's still far too early to judge.
oh you put beautifully in good english, it sounds way more professional that way xD
but yeah exactly!
i tend to give up on mangas easily, but if it turns out good, could you warn me please ?
Sure! Will do (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
thanks !
Hello ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
It's been a long time I'm here to update you of my opinion and final thoughts.
I'm dropping this webtoon it's not for me tbh all the things the mc gets are handed to him in a platter. He's just an op character in this world. I got the kirito vibes and it seems like this can go in a harem direction which is also something i'm not into. It's a matter of my preference if your into that then please do continue to read it.
About the story:
I didn't really care about any of the characters including the mc. It felt like such a fictional mary sue character and he's the only one who has this power as such it just became boring at this point. Even if a villain is to appear it just feels pointless cuz he's too OP anyway. The only development that can excite you or give you a diff feel and sense of danger is the book/his powers gets discovered. But tbh idc either way It was that boring.
This is all my opinion and constructive criticism I know it's hard to make a webtoon story and I respect the author for that.
I hope this helps (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
If your looking for something to read with similar premise.
Check this out:
° http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/reader_chang_han_yoon/
Or
° http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/omniscient_reader_s_viewpoint/
These imo are interesting from the very beginning.
Hope this helps you
hey thanks for dropping by again and the in depth commentary !
i'm not into harem or too op characters, so yeah, good thing i dropped it
i'm already reading 'omniscient reader's viewpoint' and i love it, i'll check out the other one
wow looks like a masterpiece in the making !
good plot, good MC, not too angry at the world, not a goodie either, not too smart, not too strong, not a harem, or at least we don't get nonsensically huge boobs, skirt flips, girls throwing themselves at him and being the main focus (well considering the amount of girls there is, it ll prob become one and that'd be a bit annoying, oh well)
a shame that it doesn't seem to get the attention it deserves
What's different with the new way she's calling people ?
is it less familiar and babyish and more formal ?
i'm not english so idk
She wanted call them more formal I belive. But she still goes gWwwwwwandmather even tho she can prenounce "r" normally
*to
yeah i see
cause she tried to call her grandfather 'grandpa' and it's less formal than 'grandfather' right ?
It might’ve been a translation mishap
the guy on the right on the cover is itae right ?
but he's her brother
i don't get a brotherly feel from them in the cover
is it possible he's just a 'dongsaeng' and not actually her brother ?
you have a point OUU I LIKE THIS
That's what I was thinking. Definitely everything but brotherly feels from him
maybe his parents died or sth and they're living together ?
she said herself in the recent chapter that hes not actually related
for someone that was portrayed as super sharp in the first season, she's really not admitting she's a witch huh
I suspect she is under a spell. She may not even realize it. Have you ever read "Sex Pistols"? The second couple, the uke (wolf god) had a spell on him, to pretend he's a monkey till he meets his mate.
ohh flamaires here now (if that's her name)
i'm so used to her in the other manga, it's a bit weird how she's presented as a new character here