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Is it weird I have no idea where this falls for me as a whole? Like I know for a fact I like it for the most part (pretty characters , story is easy to follow, no one is down right super red flag more like yellowish) but I was getting bored by chap 40. I like Yeon Oh but his developing feelings for Jaehyuk was too surface level (I guess that's why a 32 year old shouldn't mess with a 24 yr old). I know Jaehyuk treating him well and paying off his debts were kind gestures to a kid that never experienced that level of money but to me that's pretty much why he said he was gonna sponsor you (be his boyfriend and get nice things). The only gesture I get behind that made me believe Jaehyuk started to liked Yeon was buying the painting for no reason.
Also not sure why he used this boy for his body like you telling me your grandfather is so gross that he was watching his grandson sleep with his partner in the privacy of his own home?? Like make that make sense, if you know your grandfather bugged your house you get someone to debug it, not sleep with a impressionable young man? I think it would have still been a nice read and hotter build up if the sex part was not in the deal that way it feels less icky. The kid is an actor he could have faked the moans and stuff while y'all just did a lot of PDA when out.
I am proud of Yeon for standing his ground that Jae played with his emotions for too long but like I was a bit annoyed when he just said nah I'm not giving you the USB...like you don't even know why he needs that (literally evidence for Jae mother's murder....) don't be childish (I know he's 24 but that's why I don't care for Jae using him in the first place)
Also Manhwa author please stop making the age gap relationship start with the oldest knowing the young as adolescent...like come on....
Again not saying I hate it just felt like it needed polishing at times ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶