Eating my man Seo-An's cake like nothing! Woo-Won proving that he's more then pretty face and soft personality. My man dangerous in the bedroom lol he got no qualms doing what he must to make Seo-An happy, I'm so here for it ヾ(☆▽☆)
Again, it's not hard to just write both Main characters with actual human dialogue and emotions. Jaekyung can be frustrated by his developing feelings and also his medical information being leaked. That's okay, but the idea he can't just use words and just say he doesn't need any comfort (just be standoffish and cold) can get his point across without it being too toxic to handle.
My dude literally shoved his 12 in d**k in Dan without and ounce of prep work...like Dan should have been in tears and shouting in pain. Like y'all authors gotta stop writing anal sex like it's just sticking you tongue into someone's mouth. Foreplay and Prep saves lives and buttholes.
As for Dan...why is he making excuses for Jaekyung for no reason, half the crap he mentioned was barely the bare minimum (maybe outside of paying for gmom's bills). Dan saying Jae has it worse as his butt is being shredded with warning has to be the most bizarre thing I read.
I agree with you about how damn wrong and uneducated is the way these people write that anal sex is so easy, "just a walk in the park". If it was even a little realistic Dan is going to bleed and suffer horrible pain after this huge son of a b*tch just r*ped him, but no, you have him there worried about how much Jaekyung 'suffers' instead of how much his anus must be hurting.
Seriously, was it that difficult to give the character a functional mind? Or will the story have a twist in which Dan is unable to feel pain?
These authors are a joke. Sometimes I wonder what the hell is wrong with their minds.
Anus is treated like a vagina, quite common in yaoi (though even vaginal sex requires foreplay). The reader is expected to contain his disbelief and to not think about bottom having a prolapsed anus after such sexual intercourse. (￣∇￣")
You know what you're right! Dan has to have a secret super power to take unconsenting d**k up his ass with zero pain or bleeding. Cause I have zero understanding how it's done at this point. Sex between two men is nothing new or strange, like Jaekyung is canonically gay from what it's seems since all of his sex partners are men. So why can't he seem to have any understanding of anal and making sure it's pleasurable? But I guess if it was pleasurable it wouldn't be r*pe and he would be a decent human being sadly
╥﹏╥ I'm getting too old for this sh*t lol Authors gotta start growing with times man...
Same （￣へ￣）
Jaekyung is a gay man who doesn't care about the pleasure of his sexual partners, as long as it's pleasurable for him, that's all he cares about. That damn piece of shit.
I keep checking back to see how this story is going cause of the art style and cause I really want to see Dan being happy, but the author insists on making him more and more miserable.
Yeah pretty much, I'm on the same boat as you. I check in here and there and just get disappointed and leave again. Honestly I think I'm also in a toxic relationship with this damn story lol
We are both in a toxic relationship with this story. We hate it but we keep reading it. What a joke haha
I dropped it after like 40+ chapters. I never liked Lou because it's literally painted that he only thought of Ray and Ray alone. Like Kile was a damn stepping stool and he even slept with him knowing he pictured his brother (Ew!!!). I wish this story pushed the sibling saving sibling more not using poor Kile and making him feel bad about something he didn't even understand. Also Lou literally disregarded Ray and put his brother in danger like if that was me I would never speak to him again. He knew how Kile meant to Ray and he said with his whole chest he do it again. F-off dude!
i suggest u read till the end it ends up being wholesome and there's a really big character development
i absolutely hated lou but i started to like him at the end
For reaaaall! I 100% agree with you there and for some goddamn reason kile is such a simp for lou. Even if Lou gets a character development i feel like they've putted so much shit on him and one good shit can't balance it out. But true tho they should've pushed sibling saving sibling more. In earlier chapters, kile seemed more worried about his. Brother but then it slowly turns into a love wreck for Lou. (￣∇￣")
"I'm far from satisfied...I thought you said it was going to be a long night".
I can tell you right here was the turning point for me to start swooning over Matthew. That line had my ass in a daze, those green eyes! Boy!!! Lol
I am having a good time reading Under the Greenlight and enjoy the relationship being both main leads. It's not toxic (well for their relationship part at least) lol.
Also I have been reading a lot more power bottom manhwas/mangas and I am hear for it! I enjoy menxmen story lines because honestly as much as I enjoy original yaoi's most are very heteronormative and it's like aren't these two men sleeping together? Why is it always one way for the relationship to look? I'm not saying fem passing or fem styled men aren't "men" but when their always the bottom and also have "girl" style traits. Super emotional, clingy, shy, naive, etc...(which as a woman myself, I wish authors would stop that...not all women have these traits..maybe one or two but never all of these in one person all the damn time).
Anyway! I truly am enjoying the ride!ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
Their relationship is highly toxic in season 2 from the looks of it. It definitely is NOT healthy, lol. Jin is starting to act like a shitty seme in a bottom's body.
Oh damn..really? Well that's a damn shame. *Sigh* it was short ride I guess lol
These two are damn mood! I wish I identify as Seo-An--the man the perfect balance of sexy and assertive without it crossing into toxic or controlling. I absolutely love his openness about sex with Woo-Won and lays it all on the table.
But as a person I absolutely identify with Woo-Won we even share the same MIBT traits. It's so hard to put yourself out there and trust in others when the world can barely slow down and give you a damn break. I feels like your sinking everytime you try to get close to the surface. I really hope this continues to be the same continuation of communication between them even with the obvious hiccups and issues arising in the future.ヾ(☆▽☆)
wow i like how you described each of their personality. very on point.
This story is not sad, I genuinely have no idea how anyone could think the author would be weird enough to destroy her own story with such a vague or bitter ending when again and again she "attempted" to kill both Joo and Doo...she had the perfect opportunity to do it when Pilwon had the gun or when they jumped over the ledge. That would be bad writing to me because after everything she put them through and for them to die after barely living freely would be pointless and destroy her entire arc for them. I truly know in my mind and heart she wrote that moment as a symbol of Dooshik saving Jooha from drowning like Jooha did for him in the beginning and Jooha gaining his memories back is a perfect moment to give Dooshik back the man he fell in love with after he waited patiently and lovingly.
Sure she could've or should've made another panel showing them resurfacing but it's her story and to me that kiss is beautiful goodbye to us and a welcome home to them.
Cue my eye rolling (￣へ￣). At this point I wonder if Kim Dan is written to act like a human anymore? The man is always crying buckets yet doesn't ever assert his boundaries then he's thinking of Jaekyung's healthy and needs before his own? Plus Heesung spitting BS about what Jae did was out of his feelings? Like does he realize that Jae could have just asserted himself and said no touchy or we fight without the gross display of Dan's...well everything. It's like the author has to pick the worst way for Jae to act Jealous.
This story is gonna rot my soul to the core T.T
I mean whatever jk said held h down that caused a trauma so he feels the need to do everything js to save his grandma and Kim Dan does have some pride but he's not showing it cuz he's getting held down I think
I mean I agree to an extent. This is just purely my opinion about how the character is written then anything. I absolutely understand having to hold onto his pride and suck up some of Jaekyung's abuse for his grandma but I just will never understand why couldn't he be written with a sense of self. He can easily be more assertive and stand up for himself without giving up on having sex with Jae for the money. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍ but it's not my characters or story so I'll just continue to sigh in silence lol
Yo What the fuck ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ ain't no way this fucking pervert just causally sexually violated Kim Dan and exposes him without his consent to Heesung but he also full on calls him a fucking object. This is down right disturbing how much I'm ready to fucking punch a fictional character in the throat and have him arrested. Like why is the author writing such a insufferable man?! How are you suppose to want Kim Dan to end up with him? How are you suppose to forgive this? Listen I know I have read shit like killing stalking, but at least I knew what I was signing up for and the character is literally an unforgivable psychopath. This is supposed to be a "Normal" human being that with a couple of issues here and there. Jaekyung is literally a sadistic rapist with a beautiful face. This episode has to be the worse one yet, it made my skin crawl so much that I knew immediately what he was gonna do that it took me so much will power to actually read it.
At this point I am really reading this to just prove my own point that this author is gonna "redeem" him with so little thought to what he's done to Kim Dan.
I honestly just want to punch a hole in the wall everytime I see Jaekyung's face (╬￣皿￣)凸. Like why do writers/authors create such toxic men/seme's for no reason. Like Jae could be just the standard overly jealous or even slightly possessive and he would be already ten times better then this. He's already using a down on his luck man with zero options but to be his highly paid sex toy, why can't he at least act like a damn human being sometimes. Jesus I'm gonna get ulcers from reading this I can feel it #－.－)
Let's poison the damn man now! Lol man I didn't even mean to laugh Dan collapsing but like it's hilarious how much they (author) will do to make Dan a true apologist for every small thing Jae does but also just torture Dan for just wanting to drink a smoothie. Yes I get Jae is starving to death technically so I'm not hating him for being snappy but he's mean to Dan for everything he does. The man says he feels sorry for him Jaekyung's response "Get the f**k out), Dan just eats some food and laughs (pours soda all over him), he f**king breathes and Jae is ready to knock him out lmao.
Jesus Christ, it's almost impossible for me to have sympathy for Dan when he can't even just tell Jae to go F**k himself for treating him like hot garbage.