mid art which heavily relied on overblown 3D rendering from backgrounds to even as small as credit card...
mid characters. The MC's not a saint nor he got any ill intent. Yahwi's a trash. Cain's real name is Canis Lupus... like wtf fr?
the story's execution was weird. there's a lot of illogical responses from the characters. one example was when Jooin think that Cain having a 'plan' to get him was bad.
anyway, dropped.
im surprised this isn't genred as comedy. this legit made me laugh a little from time to time.
even funnier than BLs with Comedy genre on them.
the phasing was flawless and from the romance, angst, action, comedy everything was balanced. they even managed to squeeze the issue of parenting finely.
the art was slightly above average I think as they do not entirely rely on 3D renderings like most of manhwas.
now let's just wait for that garbage of a father to get whacked.
- Isn't it more logical and realistic if his anger was directed to Kyunsung instead? Just felt weird he thought of Aejoon a slut immediately.
- The misunderstanding was waaay to small to merit that effort he does just for that revenge. I mean are you gonna do the same level of effort when all you have was a small piece of information?
- Why is everyone gay?
this is SK, one of the most homophobic democracy on earth so just felt weird how open they are on that part in the story.
anyway it's an okay read. not bad not good etc.
korea should figure out how to properly make a short BL.
the only short BL manhwa that Ive read so far in which it was written finely is the 'Sheep's Mask' all every other are like this. horrible phasing, felt like rushed, cringey logic etc.
it's not a fluffy story nor a slice of life.
there's even no character development.
the art was good(except from that overused car 3d model lol)
If toxic relationship is their main direction, then I'm afraid it's written poorly.
also, having the story in the seme's POV just left a bad impression on me for the creator, it seems like they're somewhat justifying that shitty personality.
I know this is our cup of tea and oh boy the creator delivered.
but if you think of defending Jaekyung... go get yourself a psychiatrist.
Probably the most satisfying toxic BL Manhwa ever, I can't quite find the right wording but it just simply fulfill all your questionable tastes. kekeke.
and It's satisfying because every shitty actions are not left out without any retaliation, emotionally or physically from both the major characters and for the side characters.
well of course the story and some scenes are 18+ but the way this was written genuinely feels like I'm reading a children's book.
The Synopsis was great and for a BL Manhwa, the art is quite good. But the story was rather disappointing…
From the initial to 40+ chapters; the story just felt stagnant. There’s also a huge jump in the story from time to time which is weird and doesn’t compliment with the story at all. this is where I think why it feels lacking overall.
The story also kind of leans towards mystery but even the story’s direction isn’t clear. Unpredictability is great for a story but only if executed flawlessly, not on this however…
The creator could’ve have also polish the character’s background & emotions because the only clear emotions we can see are with the ML, not even the MC.
If the the chapters started during when they were in highschool, it would be a trainwreck for us. we will see the start of Yoon & Taejoo's love.
it's already a sad one and they did a good execution to show it but imagine we have seen more of their love before and Taejoo's struggle during those 5 years.
Overall, it's a satisfying story but I just can't help to still feel bad for Taejoo, Yoon was his world and his half and he was taken advantage of by Youngwoo. I mean, Youngwoo could help and comfort Taejoo without wanting to be fucked. 5 years is too much, yes. but it's not surprising to think Youngwoo was a huge influence to Taejoo, basing on his attitude and his desperatation he could've gaslighting Taejoo at that time too.
yall rate everything high if its colored. it's just frustrating to see half-assed stories gets 9+ while this one, despite delivering what it has inteded got too much critism in the comments.
the characters are well... childish. but it's already an unserious story to begin with. it's an easy to swallow basic comedy, and kudos for the creator for making it clear and be consistent with it.
it's format, despite being a webtoon is actually easy for the eyes and I would take B&W over half baked flat coloring anytime.
I also like how the phasing is downright straightforward, it's not skipping anything nor it has anything unnecessary.
Good Plot & Direction but with poor to adequate execution.
the art is what you'd expect from a BL Manhwa & characters are okay with no infuriating characters (cheers to that!)
I said poor execution as there's a lot of scenes and chapters where it could really hit your emotions but they did a poor job at doing it.
the art, format, story-telling, phasing, character development etc.
everything is magnificent so I was surprised when it's tag as webtoon, but it turns out it was only published in Korea.
though it has a repetitive pattern. it actually has a story that can get you into it but damn, there's basically sex in every each of the chapters, it's surprisingly becoming a turn off for the story.
https://www.mangago.me/home/mangalist/2726293/
THE SECOND PART OF THE LIST
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If anyone knows more about cheating seme, please leave me reply so that I can add it in this list too
This list is for seme that had sex with someone else other than the uke (partner, ex, ect) and I didn't put the 'context' and just only focusing on the seme that had 'intercourse' with someone other than the uke.
If u want to know the whole context, please read the story
I hate Iriya.
He's rude and blunt and he's the first to look Riku with disgust which continued until just recently and he probably won't help Riku that much if it isn't for Keiki.
He was also portrayed as like a "teacher" to Riku so he can be worthy of Keiku, but what's there to be taught? aside from being aware of your surroundings and be cautious from other alphas? Riku doesn't need to be taught on how to live as an Omega too, since he can live or behave the way he wants anyway.
Riku already has proven to be excellent not just in academic but also in leadership even before all of this.
anyway, the way the mother was confronted was satisfying even if the translation was epileptic.
there is something about this that makes it realistic yet unrealistic, it's so unique and beautiful.
and it's all thanks to the brilliant writing.
the arts, topics, characters, objects etc. everything is simply colorful and beautiful.
I also want to point out the difference how open tokyo people are compare to the ones in seoul, lmao can't be more accurate.
still felt bad he's been taken advantage of left and right and no matter when or where you looks he's still basically a replacement.
Ken deserve much more.
So it is safe to assume that his brother was secretly worrying for him when they were young in the that one panel?
I really hate his brother but for such a beautiful manga, I don't want it to be ruined due to my annoyance towards a horrible character.