>literally narrates everything
>grab his stomach
>looks at mcdonals
>stare at his food like an idiot
this chapter is killing me. bitch I feel like reading something equal to Dora
Not sure what to feel about Hirono, He being an outgoing kid lead to such a fortunate event for Hime but after that it’s all just cowardice. It’s even more pitiful when you really take a look at Hime’s background.
While it’s a great that Hime see Hiro as his source of strength and Hiro loved him, looking from realistic perspective; I won’t be surprised if Hirono will leave him in the future.
I mean that’s what I see in his character when you compare it to ppl irl.
The Portrayal, Plot, Characters, Art & Overall Execution just felt like it’s trying hard, too hard actually.
Reminds me of kids trying to act mature or when kids try to get into adult conversations.
The general idea of the dream thingy synopsis was okay and had some potential but the fact that this took more half a decade without any improvement from writing, execution to art is just plain sad. Like 8 years just for this? (But if this kept the creator fed then.. okay)
Despite being a side character, he’s basically the strongest omega ever to exist in manhwa lmao
Imagine divorcing your shitty alpha and not giving in??
All the other omegas could neverrrrr-
this is peak mid.
not bad nor good.
18+ but seems to be written similarly to 12 years olds fairytale books.
just something to keep you engage all throughout so not to drop.
i must say I was disappointed though, as I have seen a lot of people saying it's their fave? ???
It wasn't even from a novel, isn't it?
I bet this whole thing was just a repulsive decision from the creator.
The synopsis in general has a potential but the whole thing lacks enthusiasm from it's creator who clearly doesn't know what do to.
From the execution, next-chapter decision, art everything was obviously made just to reach the deadline.
The main POV should be focus on Jun instead of Yoonseul's. As a reader it would certainly leave a bitter taste when the MC is two faced trashy, especially for this kind of genre of BL.
Kinda like they're normalizing it? or justifying it?
People kept saying Yoonseul's a wreck after realizing his feeling but where?? there's no any significant remorse from him. all he did was to aggressively approach Jun without being considerate to the whole situation immediately, acting like a spoiled child who can't be stopped until he gets what he wants.
He's also basically gaslighting Jun.
imma bet $20 that the MC and that piece of shit will end up together.
And the creator will give the ML a dramatic past to justify why hes being like that.
all this while ignoring the fact that the ML is a genocidal fvck
They love creating heavy plots but seem to forgot everything except the Infuriating negative parts.
every inch of this mahwa are like specifically designed to induce infuration. From the start up till now, from the characters personality, everything is infurating to unlikeable at best.
boi looking like he lives in the gym doing routine nonstop 7 days a week and is basically as docile as a sheep.
I know and love characters that looks contradictory with their personality but this not it. look at those waist and tiddies it's almost comical.
Actually the whole thing is ridiculous, it's like the creator intentionally made the story like that to induce annoyance, but surely they're not that dumb.... or are they?
ch 38. is so frustrating.
never ever build up a drama just to end it in a comedic way, that's just disappointing way of writing.
But it's giving twilight im sorry
Twilight is already horrible at it is but think of it with half the budget
One of the few well thought BL Manhwas, The flow may felt rushed but actually not. as it is only being straight forward, they only show what's critically necessary to the plot.
The Art is okay but not generic, they don't overly design the characters which is an unwritten rule in Manhwas.
The hate the ML is receiving is superfluous.
I would argue that his redemption arc is actually one of the satisfying among the rapist MLs in Manhwas. He already gave everything up for the MCs sake, risking his life multiple times. plus, he's truly a good natured person at heart who cares for his people which is rare as a lot of rapist MLs in other manhwas are just selfish jerk.
Chen, despite what he's done, he's still not better for the MC. He can give his love to MC but not his loyalty or life. He's ready to do everything for the Ming Emperor, even killing the MC (Chen quite literally said that)
take a break and plan the script, scene and plot carefully.
seriously this is getting weird. It's probably heading to the point where they'll just release whatever first comes to their mind just to meet deadlines and reach the ending at the earliest possible.
so it all started because the ML saw the MC running and it made him "naturally hard"...
the plot is not plotting yall
The setting is what made this interesting;
A Modern South Korea with existing constitutional monarchy. Fascinating to think what would happen if Imperial Japan did not abolish it; like would it have significant affect in the korean war?
I also adore the mixture of traditional & modern clothes they worn.
In fiction, I don't care how awful or evil the character is, just make sure that character is penalized at the end.
But that doesn't seem to be the case here, everything is just too much, if the writer would just let those three get away without suffering then it's evident what kind of human being the writer is.
The only ending that I can see that would truly put the readers at ease are either those three wound up in jail or the MC kiIIs himself for those three to realize what they've done and for him to be free as well.
