The Author balancing the story between heavy drama then in between he would squeeze in a comedy script.
Not sure what to feel about that when the situation is soo deep.
The Length and flow are perfect for a Webtoon. Not unnecessary long like most webtoons are but also not too short, while the plot is straight forward, it felt a little lacking from small details.
And the ending was anticlimactic! Yeah they live happily ever after but it could've been much better!
They could've used Do Hyun's hatred towards Heesung for a better ending phase or extend the chapters where Jaeyeon kept rejecting Hessung for more drama.
It's good but there's an imbalance with the MC and the plot. It's about gambling yeah but there are times where it's all about cards cards & cards which I find boring and is overshadowing the story and the MC.
The scripts are not that well thought too as each panels has the MC basically narrating everything. too much actually.
There isn't much special but the writing was professionally done which is rare for BL Manhwas and thats why I think people loved this.
Everything is so vague and each characters are full of flaws. The Mystery genre was done awfully.
This would've been a great manhwa if they bother hiring a team of proofreader and a proper scriptwriter. smh.
There's an MC but it feels the three of them are the main characters, he just happen to be the bottom.
and what monk would fricking say that shit? lmao
Also, Can we praise how the author stick to manually drawing the tigers instead of relying on 3D shits?
But you know whats annoying?
Even in fiction ppl can't leave wild animals alone ffs.
This has to be one of the most headache inducing ART in Manhwa ever.
Poorly placed background, Poorly blurred shits; like whats with the blurr it doesn't add dramatic effect anyway?
The overly used paint brush used for the pheromones. Then almost every panel are filled with this cheap-ass glare filter.
It easily obliterate all other vampire bls despite being so short.
Also OPEN THE SCHOOLS!!!
yall need to up yall reading comprehensions or whatever.
bitch? How did he drown when they just stood there and the water level is still below their upper body???
These whole thing is so cliché but it's the cliché we love at least.
It made remember how meticulous mangakas are when it comes to stroke in their drawings.
this alone will make me stop reading manhwas for a few months lol
Ritsu is such a piece of shit.
Even homeless orphans who grew up with nothing have more conscience, remorse and basic morals than him.
It's so fitting since only the end of the world could change a bastard like him in real life.
it seems to be set during 1950s-60s but the MLs are riding in a 1920s and 1990s cars.
You would see a camera that is used during the early 1900s but the photography equipments are from the 21st century lmao.
the location looks 1950s Mainland China but you would see historical korean architecture. you would see chinese and korean posters in the background.
This is truly horrid writing overall as if they did not take anything else into consideration when writing this except the script of the characters.
they have been publishing hundreds of BL Manhwas written like shits for years now without a miss then a brilliant work such as this are put on hiatus for how long now?
this BL can even compete with high cost animes in terms of story, world building and characters.
and don't get me started with the writing and the art. The comedy and the seriousness of the plot are well balanced. The foods alone are drawn not some 3D shits which is quite rare for manhwas.
why da hell is the MC looking like he's 5 minutes away from joining RuPaul's dragrace.
This type of Art should be celebrated in BL Manhwa not those generic looking look we all see nowadays.
It's just so refreshing and the style alone says a lot for the creator. Meaning; they ain't lazy like most manhwa bl creators.
please tell me that he never sleep with those housekeepers and it's just pure bullshit by minho...
because it's the root of Minho's mistreatment and the way Woojin did not cleared all that up to minho's face and just straight up said he love taehwan is such a unsatisfying script.
I just want to see Minho regretting the way he treated Woojin just because of his shitty misunderstanding. Well let's see if s2 will deliverrr
This has potential.
The Characters and dynamics are 10/10
The Recent chapters and reasonings are just borderline goofy.
