The stories has potential and the creator clearly has a vision. But the scripts are off. Like it was written by edgy 1x year olds and uploaded it on wattpad
Despite being generic overall. There are only few BL Webtoons that delivers satisfying endings with antagonists and I'm very glad since the title did NOT disappoint.
Must be the only BL from Korea where you can see the creator has passion for arts.
Not just the arts but the whole plot is written so well.
It is sad that readers can barely comprehend such efforts and would rather praise 3D photoshop slops these days.
One of the best ART in BL. The handrawing used with pencil marker is just chef's kiss. There is life in every panel.
I mean that btch deserved to be dragged around the floor or worse for what he's done no?
But the plot is unclear. like why is it turning into action/spy shit suddenly.
Something about how the story develop makes me uncomfortable for a reason. I cannot exactly say it's lacking but I'm still looking for something. The characters and settings are just so perfect for some instense love triangles or something.
The synopsis, characters, art & formatting are great though.
It's a story of failure that blooms a wonderful ending.
Another work that proves nothing can top a Shounen-Ai when it's paired with Horror. Japanese Story Telling is truly something else.
Yall may think Hayato's decision was infuriating, because it is. That's the reality. Modern Japan is still considered homophobic and conservative. Now think how it is for gay couples centuries ago (considering they're all from prominent clans) I actually applaud they even manage to squeeze that topic on to the story.
This ain't a webtoon where all male characters are gay. Y'all gotta appreciate realism sometimes.
How are yall accepting the art.
Actually, the whole thing. everything is just so poorly done.
This ought to be rejected.
the headache inducing art, the nonsensical logic from characters, the weird narration, the incomplete world building paired with poor translatation/scan and the immaturish script.
This is Lobotomy.
I know it's focused on their mental issues.
They've been SUFFERING especially the MC, and it seem to me that what they did is not enough.
Puking on the root cause is not enough.They should've get that man cancelled and publicly humiliated.
I love the synopsis, especially the misunderstanding. But the plot are in the edge of being horribly executed.
This seem rushed. There's fast phasing but the happenings on this one feels almost instantaneous--leaving a gap in between major story points.
Horrible scripts also started appearing at the second half of the first season.
Just hoping the writing won't get worse at Season 2
this is the very example of not giving.
the art, script, plot, setting is simply not delivering.
go girl give us nothing.
i already find guideverse silly but in ch67 a dragon showed up...
like I get its fantasy but it's so out of place considering the whole setting and even the aesthetic.
and what's the point of having a harem from the start just for the MC to end up with one.
Similar to Game of Thrones, shit is so well done but ultimately lead to disappointment.
The ending is so abruptly unsatisfying. It would be perfect if they hang that bitch up.
That evil bitch incarnate shouldn't lived at all.
She was portrayed as cunning and evil all from the start, naturally the readers will feel growing hatred towards her. But no, the writer decided it's better to leave her unscathed despite how bitch she is.
That is just so fucking disappointing. What was the creator thinking?
We have lots of historical BL (Fantasy, Goryeo, Feudal Japan) but never Realistic Medieval.
Man, I wish they'd create more of BL with European Medieval settings, It's soooo rare like this is the first one ive read and a lowly Knight and a Pheasant at that.
And fuck this rating system, it's so useless. Mangago should've just remove it.
I don't get the hate with toxic BL Mangas like this.
I mean, similar BL manhwa with same plot, circumstances and arguably worse art & writing will get 5 stars from average mangago readers no doubt.
Is it because it's not colored?
It's unique Art has its charm. Love the creator for taking that risk.
The plot is also consistent, but it doesn't mean it's a good story. Its just well executed. You would see similar writing and plot with low-budget Asian or Latin Dramas.
Average Story.
Questionable to Annoying Writing.
Unique Art in a Genre Full of Lookalikes.
Great Execution compare to average BL Manhwa.
7/10
Need recos where the couples relationship are declining/deteriorating.
Basically starts off good/sweet then turns toxic similar with the 'Piercing Stab' couple.
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/piercing_stab/