CREDIBLE CRITIC asked a question

Need recos where the couples relationship are declining/deteriorating.

Basically starts off good/sweet then turns toxic similar with the 'Piercing Stab' couple.

https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/piercing_stab/

CREDIBLE CRITIC created a topic of Safe Partner

but the scriptwriting and art is so ass

CREDIBLE CRITIC created a topic of Pearl Boy

They looking like they were designed by plastic surgeons

who

who tf tagged this with adultery eh?

CREDIBLE CRITIC created a topic of Lost in the Cloud

That father deserves to die while his mansion is burning.

Idk how to properly explain but Im not rooting for their relationship nor against it. I just don't feel anything.

I really love replacement plot but this felt so flat. I felt bad for the MC but it wasn't enough. Then Ed is just a spoiled shit. The Plot is just so uneventful.

For some reason it reminds me of Hallmark movies, they have that same kind of vibe and production

MC's mother was decapitated in front of him, his whole clan and family was massacred.

this type of shit is not redeemable.

bitch I can't- this shit is 2/10

I know it's completely fictional different universe but I still can't help to think Caesar's an oligarch under Putin.

It just doesn't felt right idk

CREDIBLE CRITIC created a topic of Daily Thick Fog

Look at the first panel. That's the biggest, tallest single bed ive ever seen.


It's so comical how they're so reliant on 3D shits these days

CREDIBLE CRITIC created a topic of Rivalry

The quality of the creator's work degraded huge time especially in the ART.

The story is idk, it's not giving...
It's just mostly frustration.

This has been quite the cliché like most of the bl manhwas.

CREDIBLE CRITIC created a topic of One-Way Romance

shit looks like it's drawn by Picasso


I'm not saying its ugly. I actually applaud the artist for it's approach and uniqueness but...
those intense expressions really do look like a horror Picasso.

CREDIBLE CRITIC created a topic of Jinx

This season though would be filled with stupid decisions from the MC because... cliché

I feel like the next chapters are gonna be 'Imma drop this' material...

(Will still keep reading though despite how cliché everything is, it's the cliché that we fujoshis and fudanshis love lol)

Can someone pick this up or upload the official? (I know Im demanding but aren't we all here sorry)

The art is so gorgeous, it's really obvious when the creator has passion for drawing.

Its just that the shitty translation almost ruined everything, it's barely readable.

CREDIBLE CRITIC created a topic of Double Trap

It was so unnecessary.

Like I would get if his characters a goofy type or if this webtoon is a comedy one but no, what was the creator thinking

His overall character is flawed too, he can just easily get tf out of that house instead of sleeping over but for some reason he can't really refuse when his character is built on the not pushover type?

CREDIBLE CRITIC created a topic of Reunion

I hope the creator fix their format of this work because I swear theres a chapter where I have to scroll so much because it's just plain white panels ffs.

Theres also a lot of chapter where you will scroll twice the size of the screen just for single text bubble.

Stop extending panels unnecessarily because it doesn't make the webtoon feels long.

But its missing something.

The script, phasing and plot are done professionally. It's evident when the creator is working with a team instead of just working alone.

But the synopsis is lacking when you really analyze it. They put all the drama to the side couple and left nothing for the main.

Kind of like those low budget kdrama they broadcast during morning.

CREDIBLE CRITIC created a topic of Acanthus

Brilliant synopsis but its phasing is TOO FAST.
It delivered but it leaves so much room for more drama or better plot development and script.

The art is interesting, we can see that the creator is trying hard to differentiate his art from the generic design manhwas have. but kind of more or less failed and there are still some inconsistencies especially with Hosu but the art is still nice and Minhwu looks so cute despite not being a uniqure character design.

CREDIBLE CRITIC created a topic of Exotic Love

Possesion & Distribution of Illegal Drugs, Multiple counts of Physical & Sexual Assault,
Defamation, Obstruction of Justice, Falsification of Evidence, Bribery and Kidnapping.

Man, I want Jung Jaehan to go to jail. Definitely not a likeable MC.

But it's kind of refreshing to see an immoral kind of MC when everything nowadays are generic.

There's so much to do with the plot but I find it weird that its solely focused on Jaehan's romantic confusion which is obviously not enough. This work is Lackluster.

CREDIBLE CRITIC created a topic of Stalker's Game

They have this unique style of art and actually have colors and identity.

Formats are also done well.

Now, 98% of BL Manhwas all have this generic character designs and artists are TOO reliant in 3D shits.

What I also love about this work is how perfectly long it is. It's just 30+ chapters yet it gets the job done.

Many creators nowadays will abruptly rush their work or will extend every chapter and panels as unnecessary as possible.

CREDIBLE CRITIC created a topic of Lost in the Cloud

The Author balancing the story between heavy drama then in between he would squeeze in a comedy script.

Not sure what to feel about that when the situation is soo deep.