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I hate it. It makes no sense - flies all over the place. First, BV wants Shinobu to make love, Shinobu goes to that guy to get experience so he can teach it to BV but then he does or doesn't want BV? I can't make heads or tails out of it. I can't wait for this part to go by. Get back to the original couple - I want to see them FINALLY get together, you know??
Me too, I totally agree this couples sh*t does not make any sens
Hm - I liked the stories and themes, for the most part - rather realistic. But I couldn't get into it at all --- something about the art - small heads compared to the bodies, the eyes... something. Still, I've read these stories over and over because I like the tales - but still get hung up on the art. Oh well - others really liked the art too so to each their own, eh? haha -- something for everyone.
For the genre, the art is one of the rare few to tend toward a unique, more traditional style of illustration~ So, it's not bad at all, especially when there are things like this around XD : http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-Jj2O77evrK8/Vc3yOG1euKI/AAAAAAAANDM/xPDQzNG2Ddw/s1600/BodyGuard_pg014%2Bcopy.jpg
oh my god i kept laughing at my work like crazy ahahahahaha what's this
Ryt?? So hilarious!