the anatomy on this is killing me.... coochie small as hell, all the way in the front. why is her urethra so prominent?? there are books on this stuff these days, y'all, it doesn't have to be like this
this is such a real "older sister of a gay younger sibling " experience they can't do shit for themselves.
I'm having some trouble reading this just because I feel like this is actually quite a realistic depiction of financial abuse and manipulation. Not necessarily every single big action and event being realistic, but the way he speaks to her and the way they interact. And knowing that he's almost definitely endgame... I think I'll have to drop it.
she's so desperate that it's actually embarrassing and sad to read. girl, stand up and go to therapy. i can't take it, it's physically making me cringe.
It might all be technically consensual, but that doesn't mean the seme isn't taking advantage of puppy-kun. He's being manipulative and unnecessarily cold. A big part of actual bdsm is caring for the sub and he just doesn't. Puppy-kun deserves better (╯︵╰,) Seme has a lot of redeeming to do if he's gonna stick around.
I agree );
I thought extra chapters were gonna be cute fluffy James and Samuel domestic life why is this (´°ω°｀)
I was having fun with this at first, but "FL does everything perfectly and faces almost no issues and everyone loves her and she's super powerful" gets a little sickly after a while. There's no depth to this.