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Things seemed like it was going ok with the first few chapters, but this pacing was horrible! They took so long building up the villain but the main boss battle was done in like two chapters? Like, make it make sense Talk about a total letdown. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
Also lusting after a married woman just because she was nice? I know it was a tough childhood but that is some really unstable stuff right there. ALSO ALSO the FL is WAY too soft and too forgiving!