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I'm so happy for the updates after so long of almost nothing. My heart is so crushed each time Illya gets hurt by her "family" and I want to find out what happens. But the uploads my lord are they headache-inducing. I get four chapters of the same scene over and over again and then it jumps to a new chapter without securing the ending for the previous one and it gets me so upset and confused. I've literally had to go to another site just to read a chapter that the uploader missed. Don't get me wrong, I'm loving this story and want to see how it ends but still!
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I actually enjoyed it. Surprised it was so short tbh. There were some bumps along the way but I could tell that the author did their best and were enjoying what they were creating. I'm a sucker for all the details, yet the fact the art was simple really stood out to me. The proportions aren't even but who said drawing people was easy? good design, good backgrounds, and the female lead isn't a complete fool when it comes to ill intent, and doesn't ignore Zach, and puts the pieces together quickly. (Though I don't forgive Zach for that forced intamicy ) Give this an 8/10.
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I'm on chapter 64. I'm not sure who else got that far so spoiler warning. I'm enjoying the slice of life cooking in another world story. But I'm getting weirded out and kinda annoyed with the aliens. Like why? They hold no place in the story and it just makes it all confusing. It really just doesn't fit in. I'm going to try and stomach through it, but I probably won't be rereading this any time soon if this is what the plot is going to stay as.
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My cheeks hurt so much from smiling!!!!!(≧∀≦)
The simp, love-struck alpha, and dom omega interaction were so adorable.
I really appreciate that obviously, the road wasn't all sunshine and rainbows, and that both of them had to learn each other's boundaries and how to act with each other. Like the seme had to know to listen before acting (Sometimes win and some fail lol) and the uke needed to understand that his lover would love him unconditionally and just had to trust in his words (Same with the seme). There are some kinks that seemed off but other than that, I LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!!! ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
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Dang, I am really getting tired of the main character. I know author-kun is doing their best to translate so its not on them. She's bratty, obnoxious, toxic and kind of a gas lighter. She knows things are dangerous but always puts herself in a risky position instead of trusting her "mates" to figure things out and come back. She literally has a miracle baby who could die but she would rather take her to a desert where she most likely wouldn't survive as well as a snake husband who doesn't do well with sand. Winston is like the only competent husbands and the MC DOESN'T LISTEN to any of them when they are trying to protect her! Curtis is a jerk, he tries to protect the MC but is a major red flag especially when it comes to her other kids like Parker's cubs and Winston's daughter. (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
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I don't like how this world is clearly made to have multiple 'mates' for better survival, but the mc refuses to even do anything and it puts her and the 'mates' she does have at risk. Like I can get wanting only one husband, but this is not the world were thats possible. Not to mention the way she let's her 'mates' treat her kids! Plus she herself sucks at taking care of them! It also infuriate me that she can do so much more because she has the knowledge of our world but doesn't!!!
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Also don't forget her snake babies. She doesn't even think about them except for that one time when she saw the snake boy but then she's all like, oh no he's going to fall in love with me too. Then it just got creepy. And I was like, aren't they snake babies half human too? So like, it's really stupid. I hate it. Trash fire everything. I just feel bad for the snake babies. The kid didn't do anything wrong except try to figure out his path in life and of course he doesn't have much of a mom. His father is trash too
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“The kid didn’t do anything wrong”
The kid: *proceeds to have merfolk try and kill my dad and parker so i can mate with my mom instead* tf?? Curtis already made it known that once their kids obtain his memories, they’ll try and mate with her. It’s as if you didn’t read a damn thing about this story other than a few recent chapters or some shit.
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The story is pretty cute so far, and I do like it. But it really has a lot of time skips, it felt like there wasn't a lot planned. Like, it would have been nice to see the relationship change with the female lead and the main character, instead of in "In two weeks we were best friends", or even with Shelby's parents. How did they automatically start treating her like a daughter, and where was her reaction to all of this? Idk, it felt a little empty.(〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
Things seemed like it was going ok with the first few chapters, but this pacing was horrible! They took so long building up the villain but the main boss battle was done in like two chapters? Like, make it make sense Talk about a total letdown. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
Also lusting after a married woman just because she was nice? I know it was a tough childhood but that is some really unstable stuff right there. ALSO ALSO the FL is WAY too soft and too forgiving!