Uh, i feel like there isn’t a need to make this longer like some are saying. There’s no way a happy ending would come out of this, and it’s clear that the guy is a yandere, there isn’t really any explanation for his obsession with Agatho besides the fact that Agatho showed him kindness and made a promise to him, but that just kind of expresses how crazy Noah is. He’s that deluded.
i’m sorry but if i ever fell for someone like that, i’d punch them and file a restraining order. Usually i’d be like "ah they weren’t dating or in a labelled relationship like that, so he didn’t really cheat" but bro, he knew what he was doing :/ anyways, yeah would be 1000x better if it ended with the unrequited love guy realising how much of an asshole the other guy is and just.. you know, not dating him.
they were literally one shots, of course the only good story is the first one.
For the third story, how the hell are you gonna call the seme a manwhore? what the fuck is wrong with you all? So having sexual relationships is wrong unless they’re in love? Seme liked the uke, but they weren’t dating, he didn’t cheat or do anything wrong, he just slept with the other guy. Neither of them revealed their feelings until after the seme had had sex with the other guy. Hookups exist. They rarely end with a romantic outcome anyway.
Just reacting about the first part of your comment : that's not true at all, there are a lot of very good ones shots. It's not about the length, these were just badly written.
fair, but oneshots typically fail to get a good plot or a good relationship dynamic in one chapter, especially when that one chapter is only around 30-40 pages. I mean if you can recommend me some good ones, i’d appreciate it. Always looking for more to read.
I think the themes of the oneshots heavily influence it aswell. A lot of the best psychological stuff i’ve read have been one shots, however when it comes to romance it just seems rushed.
I literally can’t deal with the whole "oh i’ll sleep/date someone else for your benefit", It makes me so angsty because you’re literally doing no one a favour. I’d literally kill myself if the person i loved broke up with me and got with someone else 'for me', just- what the hell. I couldn’t ever handle that much guilt.
like i’ve read the raws and stuff but i’m still hella angsty
You don’t have to spoil anything. Just please tell me those two have a happy ending?! Please tell me park and subs make it
oh, i don’t mind people sleeping with others if they aren’t in an actual relationship, but it does hurt seeing someone sleep with someone else to forget their feelings. Like i don’t mind mc sleeping with the actor guy, it’s just the reason why that hurts.