beta
Not a great story, every part of it was rushed, every character, plot point, character story. didnt understand why he chose joseph even though he showed himself, (im not exactly 100 percent sure what was in the box but clearly it was bad), im pretty sure giving him a box of rat poison and making him scared and manipulated him? i feel that mc didnt know glen long enough to make him so in love withhim that he would look over that. Also like, what happened to vincent?? bruh this author needed to flesh out their story cuz cmon, it was messy. art was ok